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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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She wanted me to paint a field of roses in soft focus to hide the imperfections of thorns. She wanted me to close my eyes when we kissed to ignore the interactions of her tongue. She begged the snowmelt to hurry and enter the river, so she wouldn't have to see dirty thaw. She closed her eyes whenever she walked forward: it was the dumbest thing I ever saw. [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (edited 12-10-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mike...just don't let it become your HALLMARK....oh my? am I bad? guess I yam... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wow......you have totally inspired me.....go find it and tell me what you think, please?  -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Oh yes I really do love this one, a really excellant wonderful piece from you. Absolutely terrific. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
S'en, you are truly a card. SEA, glad to have inspired something so cool. Marsha, where were you last night when I needed support?  Mike |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Wonderful, I have to agree with the wonderful responses before me. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Startime, much thanks. Mike |
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