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Blackdrake Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 83Depends on the day :) |
I feel your eyes upon me, As I turn to walk away. Trying to hide my face from you, For all the emotion I might betray. Every time you grace the room, Confusion roams throughout my mind. Your presence has that effect on me, It is unfortunate I must keep my heart resigned. The sound of your voice, Is music to my ears. The sound of which entrances me, Anytime that I am near. To look upon the moonlit stars, I can gaze into your eyes. For those bright and sparkling orbs Reflect the midnight skies My heart beats ever faster, When ever you cross my mind. God knows you’ve stole my heart, I’m yours till the end of time. The thought of ever hurting you, Is as a knife into my heart. To cause you any pain, Would cause my soul to forever depart. My love for you is endless, Like a ring, without a seam. You are everything anyone could want, You’re as perfect as any dream. ~~---¥---~~ Mysterious is the shadow walking down the path of light. ~~ ¥ ~~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
*sigh* Wonderful words of love. May we use it in the Valentine issue of Digital Passions?  |
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Blackdrake Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 83Depends on the day :) |
I would be most honored, for my poem to be used for Valentines.  Mysterious is the shadow walking down the path of light. ~~ ¥ ~~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
There is no mystery in these words They speak of love with a voice That longs to be heard. . . Excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I think you wrote the mystery rightout of the title by placing a beautiful yearning longing love poem underneath it...very well done!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful writing. So full of love and emotion. May your love be returned to you ten fold. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Blackdrake Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 83Depends on the day :) |
Thank you all . But without my Beloved Kat , this poem would not exist . Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light. ~~ ¥ ~~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"The thought of ever hurting you, Is as a knife into my heart. To cause you any pain, Would cause my soul to forever depart. My love for you is endless, Like a ring, without a seam. You are everything anyone could want, You’re as perfect as any dream. ~~---¥---~~ yes, the entire poem is outstanding, but the last 8 lines touched my heart more than anything you'll ever imagine. Thank you and your lady is truly blessed!! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Once again I was drawn into your words and held there to see where the journey would take me...a beautiful trip to love and all of the emotions that it holds in it's hands. Beautiful weaving BD and it will be great to read it again for Valentine's day! Congrats!! You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Blackdrake Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 83Depends on the day :) |
I am Most honoured to be complimented by all who have posted replys . to be acknowlaged by poets with more talent than i can ever hope to compeet with , is Wonderful to me . Thank You all . Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light. ~~ ¥ ~~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful lovely piece....so full of love. I enjoyed reading it very much Charisma |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Blackdrake- this is so beautiful and full of love and devotion.. lovely write. ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Ominous Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 68Canada |
MY dear brother, I am so impressed. Your poem touched my soul and is one of your best yet. I just saddens me that you had to go through the life experience of losing your first love. But it has caused you to grow in great ways, and this poem is proof of that. Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light |
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