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Love in the Wind
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Love in the Wind |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia 
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Love in the Wind The branches move As the wind rustle thru the trees I watch them sway gently Like a lovers dance Silhouetted against the sky The beauty stirs inside me I am that tree My arms reach out Catching that gentle breeze Of your whispers Telling me of your love How my heart flutters. 12-11-00 -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Let your heart flutter. This is wonderful. I so love to read about love. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BEAUTIFUL! Oh, this is so lovely  -SEA |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this is beautiful! love the way you did the comparison in this. there are a lot of love poems out there, but you put a refreshing spin on it. excellent write! take care. ~amy~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very nice kitkat..like your new pic  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
excellent writing Kathy, wonderful use of metaphor imagery and emotion beautiful poetry with sweet sentiments. well done take care jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I just love a poem filled with imagery and the constant enlightment of metaphors and you have done both so well. I know it sounds like I have been hanging around JM too much but you can never get enough of that gal anyway.LOL Very lovely read from you and so glad that I found this one to bump it to the top for ohters to see. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Thank-you all for your nice relpies. Guess lately I have been in the comparison mood. But as I sat watching the trees sway in the wind I just could not help myself.*sighs* If you listen carefully you can hear my voice in the wind..Thank-you |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Great to see you, what a lovely smile, I am a nature lover and I love trees.... so you KNOW I enjoyed this. "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Loved it!!!!!!! |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Simply Wonderful... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Very good writing. I enjoyed the read. Love and light, Richard |
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