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Se Rappellent & Recuerdan (Remember)
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menage a demideux Junior Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 32 |
Rappelez-vous j'ai écrit cette poésie en anglais parce que ne comprenez pas le plus probablement la langue française..... y para nuestros de habla hispana miembros.... Recuerde escribí este poema en inglés porque no entienda lo más probablemente posible el lenguaje francés. merci & gracias Remember? There's a surface level of conversation on the edges of remembering what's been said. Let's move beyond that. OK? Let's forget the metaphors and double entendres spoken in spanish or french or some other language we can't understand, and remember the words we really spoke trying to select a memory from archives stored while standing in a gazebo gazing over the minor trickle of the creek feeding into the river with currents, so demonstrative to slam our boat into the shore -- and then, there we would be you and i and just us talking about how words muse the fuse of distance, not a material memory on film to make it real again. Yes, there's a surface level on the edges of remembering when mardi gras comes only once a year Remember? -menage a demideux 12/7/2000 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MenageADemideux~ Well, you don't post often - but when you do ... it's a wonderful read. Enjoyed your thoughts here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sometimes memories are all one can draw on...but thank God the mind retains them....and Mardi Gras only once a year? No, it's a state of mind that can be experienced any time one chooses... excellent thought-provoking poetry...  [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 12-08-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, the words of poetry are fully understood by the heart and once spoken, they take on life, and become life and give life, and they are freely understood by all..... wonderful poem What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Ryan Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 297Kansas |
"while standing in a gazebo gazing over the minor trickle of the creek feeding into the river with currents," Very nice words. Here's another one I'll save from the depths. Ryan "ah, little girls make shadows on the sidewalk shorter than the shadow of death in this town--" - Jack Kerouac |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I experienced a wonderful mini-Mardi Gras last December in New Orleans...I would go back...to remember again! This is wonderful! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Menage #1 Junior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 28 |
AHA..... I seee zat zee P.I.C. hazz alreddy been heer to rezzzkyou zee menage.... Ver havvv zzey been thozz seely deux??? OH... Zees eezz a poesie tres bon... |
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Partner In Crime #1 Junior Member
since 1999-07-21
Posts 13 |
Where have we been? Well, I, for one, have been desparately trying to remember my password. Hopefully this is it. *into the night, the thief vanishes* |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I think we've been infiltrated by the French Foreign Legion...  They're good poets, though.. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Had to read this again... il n'y a rien plus beau que la poésie et pouvoir exprimer votre amour librement. très bien fait! Kathleen |
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menage a demideux Junior Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 32 |
Merci, mademoiselle Marge -vous êtes très gentil to zzay zhat!  Monsieur le Balladeer- Para el caballero de habla hispana - Usted dice que el Carnaval puede venir todo el año alrededor? Eso suena maravilloso! Podía ser verdad? Cuándo es la estación próxima? *wink* Mademoiselle Irish - Je suis très reconnaissant pour votre éloge! Merci! Ryan- Mon petit ami! Il est si bon for the viewingness of your face! Excuser mon tres feeble Anglais! ((hugzzz maintenant!!)) Merci on le complimentaries!!! Sunshine- Moi, alzos, experiencing la petite carnivale l'un été passé et il était très spécial! Merci for la readingz! merveilleux! Menage Numéro Un!!!!! - Un de mes deux amis plus étroits! Oh my stars in my eyez, zhey fly! Où avez-vous you having been?? Maison bienvenue! Velcome a bienvenue, Velcome! La Caberet, La Caberet, La Caberet My Partner in Criminals Numero Un!!! *smooch* Zee password, she zeems parfait! Eet eez zzzoooo grand to zzzeeee you!!! Mademoiselle Nan- Merci de la bienvenue de la Légion Française de Foriegn. Veee LOOOVEEE you!  Mademoiselle Irish - I zeee you double!!! It eez tres vrais, zee love she needs expression wiz zee freedom! Merci infiniment de lire ma poésie deux fois! |
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