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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Distant Thought Amid the silence of abandoned night A vision of emptiness one does hide Whilst a heart consumed with question...... wondering why love must be tested Within the shadows of lonely fog Is where a spirit carefully walks A soul containing such purity...... yearning for one to hear it's plea Between the rays of morning sun Tears of night are soon forgot Memory of yesterday...... now a distant thought |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Coco, This tore at my heart, the feelings in this beautiful poem is amazing. Hugs galore for you. Hope you are well. Cheers Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi Daniel, it's nice to see you stop by and take a peak at this rhyme and I thank you for the 'beautiful'....  coco |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Coco, please submit this one to the main site. This is truely lovely my friend and deserves to be seen by so many more. I am adding to my library but please please please submit it to the main site. Do I need to beg? NO? GOOD!!!!!!! A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Coco~ After my dream last night.....then reading this.......I am full of tears......this is beautiful! -SEA |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this is beautiful! definitely one of my favorite from you. simply wonderful my friend! take care. ~amy~ |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
stylish and sad sentiments of the morning after... vivid, pretty, and teary. the flow is most enjoyable "The bar is always open, the time is always right. If God's good word goes unspoken, then the music plays all night." |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
MARK->you are absolutely too kind dear friend in your reply and you indeed have brought me to a tear when I read how you appreciate this... thank u sweetie so very much SEA->I am touched by your reply and thank you PoetFriend... you're always by my side and for this I smile bright AIMSTER->I have not seen much of you and I missed ya gurl...I'm happy you liked it too and thank you for stopping by ETAN->A sweet surprise to read you came by and I also thank you for taking a peak at this lil treasure of mine coco |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful reflections Coco.. a real nice recollection of those distant thoughts that fill the poet's mind with distinct virtual imaged language....loved it!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dani~ Your quill writes with feathered softness. Cashmere phrases of thought. Such enjoyment you lend to this circle of friends. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Between the rays of morning sun Tears of night are soon forgot Memory of yesterday...... now a distant thought Beautifully written, a wonderfully penned poem. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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