Open Poetry #11 |
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Silent path |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA ![]() |
A passage in this silent wind Has left me where my dreams begin Not in this world so filled with hate No hope to let rely on fate Causing me to look this time For something that I wish to find A passion for this life again Not needing to look within See the love that’s all around My friends and family I have found To carry me through times of need And see all that my kids have seen That we are all apart of one As is the light onto the sun And heart that pounds and shares one beat And flows through all we see and meet The passage to this silent wind That’s left me where my dreams begin Not knowing where I’m soon to go Now place my faith in you. [This message has been edited by spiked (edited 12-10-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You've outdone yourself lovie. Your writing is most awesome these days...as is your heart. HUGS. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!This was a fantastic read. I loved it. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SPIKED, this is great my friend I loved it every word....... ![]() ![]() |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very lovely ...enjoyed reading spiked.. ![]() ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
i like the journey portrayed here. very beautiful. "I sound my barbaric yawp over the rooftops of the world." -matching clothes are extremely overrated- |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you very much Serenity, Startime, Coco, Victoria and Ethan. This time of year usually overloads my thoughts. Rich |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what an ending! |
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