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somewhere, where dreams. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Gallery Reading Room somewhere, where dreams float in the ocean of existence you and I walk among the shores of consciousness feeling the sands of time in our toes we watch the soulsailers glide over the waves their very lives merely twinkles of our eyes the solar winds blowing them through time and tide they wave at us knowingly and we wave back at them as they go the way of light we continue to walk, breathing deeply the breath of life watching the children building sandcastles in time their creations telling the stories of history existing only for a moment until washed away to be built again, telling another story the lunar breeze flowing around them like the end of life to children smile at us and we smile back at them, marvelling at their creations I turn to you and you smile that smile of wonder at me my hand rises to touch your hair in the light of life we join hands and continue our walk here together the time we have here will only be a moment more is it really just a moment? you ask does it really matter? I smile back time stops, or does it really? and we continue to walk on this plane along the shores of consciousness -------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
somewhere, where dreaming planes collide in golden shimmering simmering light I shall read you always... lovely Sven, lovely... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this place does exist right? one day hopefully soon I will find the wonder land...beautiful Sven...always a pleasure Greeneyes *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh*somewhere, where dreams float in the ocean of existence Somewhere where dreams can become reality. So very beautiful, dear one. Dreamy, and just what I need tonight. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sven, ohhhh loved this i did! excellent, dreamy, beautiful, and inspiring. you have penned poetic perfection with this one my friend! simply beautiful... take care. amy |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
wowowow I felt this one....superb job. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sven, this is magnificient... And in dreams one moves forward thru the jewels amongst nite-time sky and with it's lite as guide of path one shall land where true love does last.... As always dearfriend, it's a treat to read your work you inspire this reader ya know that eh...  coco |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, thank you my friend. . . and I shall always read you. . .  Greeneyes, it does indeed exist. . . and shall for all time. . . thank you. . . Startime, it's my pleasure to be able to help you tonight. . . thank you my friend. . . Amy, thanks. . . glad that you enjoyed my friend. . . Saxoness, thank you so much. . . I try. . . Coco, poetfriend, it's always an honor to be able to inspire the reader. . . and I shall count it a greater honor to read your words. . . thank you. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sven...this is exceptional. I loved the form, and your phrasing is marvelous, and the imagery quite dreamy. Very well done, m'friend! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"soulsailors" Oh, boy, Sven, I'm impressed! "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I have to say simply marvelous...James |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
Wonderful, Sven, a delightful, surrealistic read. I loved the lines about the sandcastles of time. So well written... Kris All good poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings...~William Wordsworth |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sven, I haven't words enough to tell you how I love this piece.....it will be a wonderful thread..... love it. Charisma |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sven, Sounds like a wonderfully romantic and dreamy place to be, and you took us there so beautifully ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Just Wowser !, my friend. 'I turn to you and you smile that smile of wonder at me' Sounds like a smile of familiar delight ~ This is a very inspired - and inspiring piece of work. You do that well, you know ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, I have been coming back to this poem for two days know and each time it just well its perfect, you have captured how two people in love and wanting each other should be, the simple pleasure of walking down a beach can mean a moment to be cherished forever, this is what I look for, thank you so much for being you and sharing your understanding of love with the world. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
serenity, thank you my friend. . . dream on. . . Irish Rose, you like that one do you?? Thank you. . . James, I simply have to say, Thank you. . . warmhrt, it is kind of like that isn't it?? Thank you for reading. . . Charisma, you've said all the words I needed to hear. . . RP25, thank you my friend. . . Marge, thank you. . .when you're inspired, you go with it!  Cerenity, thank you my friend. . . you have honored me with your words. . . it is my hope that all of us will one day find something like this. . . and then, we'll all walk down that beach. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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