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| Open Poetry #11 |
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Swaying Memories |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Swaying Memories It's been long since I've been there on that other plane, in a realm of square where I saw you, that late night's eve when we then first began to believe that dreams could be reality and reality could be seen in the dream the times were good, the gifts, serene laughter came, and in love, careened we bent to sway the music our way until the time of that fateful day and your dream of real went one way and real the dream you could not sway now in slender silver lover's knot are kept the visions that were sought and from a plane long left behind fondly recall the days you were mine soft echoes from that plane skim along catch me, caught now with loss of song and I wonder aloud if I truly belong or if my reality has all been wrong and quietly I recall when the dream of real went our way and real the dream of love did sway Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
you are very musical sunshine |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sunshine, you capture such beauty in your poetry and I know you've been told this many times before but each time I open-up one of your treasures you never cease to amaze me at the expression and rhythm you weave into your rhymes... Sweetie, I'm keeping this one...  coco |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ This sweeps me across a chasm of recall. Gently held in sway ... beautiful, sweet poetess. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is utterly utterly perfect, it's a wonderful beautiful poem. I really love this one, it's fabulous.  Take care Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
now in slender silver lover's knot are kept the visions that were sought and from a plane long left behind fondly recall the days you were mine ====================================== I refuse to say this is perfect ... 'cuz every time I think that thought you surpass yourself. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine. . . this is beautiful. . . just beautiful. . . excellent work. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Bowie, thank you...and Welcome to Passions...sit back, read, write, and enjoy this new home... Coco...amaze?...oh my...library...?...the greatest compliment...thank you...always... Marge...that you recall with me is one of the greatest gifts...thank you... Marsha...I do believe this is the shortest reply ever given me...and I love it... Interloper, nay sir, not perfect...perfection is a level that I must still strive for...and for me...and others, I will keep trying...but I thank you for thinking so... Sven, blushing, times two...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"when the dream of real went our way..." what a beautiful line. What a way you have about you, sunshine....beautiful. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Deer, I do believe, it is only from the company I keep, here, within the walls of blue... for they never tell me dreams won't come true... [thank you] Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What a beautiful write here Sunshine...very lovely Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Paula.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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