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maxtec1
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0 posted 2000-12-10 07:31 PM



Call To The Wind
By Richard Maxfield
7-18-2000

I call to the wind
Listen for a sound
Toss love to the sky
Falls back to the ground

Toss a single pebble
On still waters quiet
Lonely heart aching
Darkness of the night

A cried teardrop
Falls on deaf ears
A lighted candle
Snuffed by fears

Toil and anguish
Nothing yet to gain
Changing everything
All remains the same

Gentle spoken words
No one ever hears
Vision in the darkness
Not so very clear

Reach out at night
No one there to hold
Things that cant be bought
Have yet been sold

Dreams never dreamt
Can they come true
Longing for true love
What more can I do

© Copyright 2000 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2000-12-10 07:36 PM


Be patient and she will find you.........


BEAUTIFUL!!   -SEA

Diane Yvonne
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2 posted 2000-12-10 07:39 PM


This is so very sad but beautifully done
I can feel the sadness you are protraying.

Great Job!!
Diane Yvonne

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3 posted 2000-12-10 07:52 PM


Very well expressed. The longing and sadness come across well. I wish you the best!

Denise

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4 posted 2000-12-11 01:58 AM


MaxTec~
Some deep longing here.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


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