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Call To The Wind
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Call To The Wind |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Call To The Wind By Richard Maxfield 7-18-2000 I call to the wind Listen for a sound Toss love to the sky Falls back to the ground Toss a single pebble On still waters quiet Lonely heart aching Darkness of the night A cried teardrop Falls on deaf ears A lighted candle Snuffed by fears Toil and anguish Nothing yet to gain Changing everything All remains the same Gentle spoken words No one ever hears Vision in the darkness Not so very clear Reach out at night No one there to hold Things that cant be bought Have yet been sold Dreams never dreamt Can they come true Longing for true love What more can I do |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Be patient and she will find you......... BEAUTIFUL!!  -SEA |
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Diane Yvonne Junior Member
since 2000-08-22
Posts 36Camdenton,Mo. USA |
This is so very sad but beautifully done I can feel the sadness you are protraying. Great Job!! Diane Yvonne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well expressed. The longing and sadness come across well. I wish you the best! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MaxTec~ Some deep longing here. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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