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CocoBaci
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0 posted 2000-12-10 05:46 PM



Summer Scorch
sensual teasing
blistering fires sultry
pearls of moist on flesh
~*~*~*~*~
Autumn Air
invigorating
appeasing brisk of embrace
whirling amber leaf
~*~*~*~*~
Winter Wonders
blanket white softness
crystalline sculptures glisten
night sky of sapphire
~*~*~*~
Springtime Splendors
chirping of sparrow
petals blossoming delight
spiral butterfly

Coco





[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-10-2000).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-12-10 05:50 PM


Coco~   Love thse, but this one.......

'Autumn Air
invigorating
appeasing brisk of embrace
whirling amber leaf'

this is what I like........... -SEA

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2 posted 2000-12-10 05:53 PM


Now I know what I like about the change of seasons...all of the above...

this is lovely, CoCo...


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
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CocoBaci
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3 posted 2000-12-10 06:05 PM



You two lady friends are always by my side when I come here and I do so much appreciate your kind words and friendship you've given me and let's not forget your treasure of inspiring poems...

psssst... SEA that is my favorite too

Coco

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4 posted 2000-12-10 06:09 PM


Lovely writing. I did enjoy reading your words.
Love and light,
Richard

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5 posted 2000-12-10 06:12 PM


ohhh love the season description.....love them all, but summerseason is my favourite

well done

Charisma

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6 posted 2000-12-10 06:22 PM


lovely Coco..beautiful images..

           ~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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7 posted 2000-12-10 06:28 PM


CoCo, this is delightful, I love this one I really do. Changing seasons, this is really wonderful, excellant work absolutely excellant.
take care
                   Mushy Marsha
                        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


Lone Wolf
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8 posted 2000-12-10 06:42 PM


Coco,

Wonderful look at the seasons my friend.     

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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9 posted 2000-12-10 07:48 PM


Absolutely breathtaking, Coco! WOW!! Impressive!!

Denise

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10 posted 2000-12-11 01:46 AM


Dani~
Oh, my goodness, but these are just BEAUTIFUL !
What a lovely kaleidoscope of color
for such a shower of thoughts.
I'm simply blown away at this piece of work.
You're something else !
Thanks for this delight !
~*Marge*~


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