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yesterday....senryu's |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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Today's pondering spirits mind of yesterday shadows from the past *** Yesterday's future behind treshold of today thread near tomorrow *** Charisma |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ohhhhh I like these!  -SEA |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Charisma, I love the hope in these my friend. May tomorrow be a better day. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Your thoughts are just lovely. What a pleasured reading. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Very nice..... I like these senryu's.... And me think's you're way too good.... Hugs2U Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-11-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Interesting meaning here.... like alot. Parker |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Charisma, I am glad that smile is still evident. Cheers Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i liked the way these senryus make me think...it did take a while for me to unravel the mystery of these confusing gems... write more  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sea: I am always glad when you like it. you are a great friend. Lone Wolf: thank you, and well allready feel better than yesterday. thank you for your reply. Marge: thank you for your reply, you know that I always appreciate them from you. CoCo: thank you, I am still learning,...but glad to know that you like them Haleya: thank you for reading and your kind reply Daniel: thank you, you always make me smile....kaile: I'm glad that you see what I mean..yes something to think about. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I would have changed one word...but still...you leave much to ponder... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very well thought out and leaves one with the feeling that given enough thought to life that there IS the answers we seek. We only need to look at life in the right light. Wonderfully penned my friend. Hugs to you. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoy the read!!!!!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
loved them Charisma .. nicely done..HUGS.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sunshine: thank you for your reply, and....well which word would you change...curious to know now... Mark: Glad to see you around, and as I believe, without the past we haven't a future, we may learn from the past to build on tomorrow. Vandana: Im glad that you enjoyed reading it. Victoria: thank you for your kind reply, it's always nice to have your comments. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice ones! |
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