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Making Love to You
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Making Love to You |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
MAKING LOVE TO YOU By Richard Maxfield 1-9-2000 May I hold you In my arms Drink deep Your female charms Look endless Into your eyes Freed spirit Minds began to fly No one But me and you Doing the things True lovers do My hand Caressing your cheek Thoughts as one Yet we don’t speak Soft skin Pressed ever so tight Shadows dance By candle light Fingers cascade Down your back Loves emotion We’ll never lack Your neck My lips softly kiss Chills Of heavenly bliss Quick breath Of passion excite Our love Will last all night Taste sweet The kiss of desire Nothing more than you I require Flesh on flesh Our souls entwine More love Two could not find Racing hearts Beet as one Our love Shall never be done Pull closer My sweet dear Whisper I love you In your ear Love me Never let go True love To you I’ll show Copyright #RM99R4 |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
alright--a new one! may i be the first to reply??  "Your neck My lips softly kiss Chills Of heavenly bliss Quick breath Of passion excite Our love Will last all night" gotta love those chills in passion!!....  (i'm about to dub you ROMEO of the blue pages!) love this.. hugs, g ps..may want to chk out that spelling error.."beet" to "beat"  < !signature--> "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 12-10-2000).] |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you for your wonderful comment. LOL you will find in reading my work I always have a screw up some where. It has become my trade mark. Oh well I do try lol. Thanks again. love and light, Richard |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
another beauty despite the "screw up" ~smiles ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
no screw ups here romeo..just spelling errors and those are allowable! just thought i'd point it out in case you wanted to chng it..but please leave it if its your 'trademark' lol..i'll be sure to look for it in each of your works! hugs, g |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Wow...Sure gave me "tingles"... Let me catch my breath... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you lady. I wrote this and all my love poems to a lover I have yet to meet. This is my way to escape loneyness. Strange I know but hey it works for me. LOl Some day when we meet all the love poems are hers to keep. Love and Light, Richard |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoying all your romantic poetry..as i sit here drinking my coffee this morning..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
beautiful poem, words from the heart always touch anothers. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Ah, yes, my dear Richard, it is so good to see you here. Your love will be wonderful as it adds to the incredible love at this board. I continue to pray that your sweet love will find you and be embraced by all the sweet passion you have to give. Much love from me to you, my friend. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this poem...James |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Whew! Ahem.......well now........I like this...... -SEA |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - Beautifully expressed! I Love this Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Now this is a keeper. Wow, you must have a lot of feelings stored up in you to be able to write like this about someone you havent yet met. She will be one lucky lady! WOW! Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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