Open Poetry #11 |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Hiding behind my dark Ray-Bans frees me so I can be someone other than me.. a voyeur perhaps to see with my vision focused casually lingering leisurely longing lustfully wandering wherever it is gratifying visually or satisfying my desire to not let you see who I really am copyright November 2000 Koko Stewart Koomoa (all rights reserved) Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I can see you in behind there you can't hide! I really like the idea of the poem! On the inside looking out! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
oh, but you cannot write poetry and have this too!!!!!! "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Very good writing. I see many pictures in my minds eye from your words pened. Thank you for the read. love and light, Richard |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Very good writing. I see many pictures in my minds eye from your words pened. Thank you for the read. love and light, Richard |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
My thanks to all for commenting on this "tongue in cheek" poem..smiles,Koko ( and you are right poetry gives you away)hehe Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Don't worry if you can't hide behind your ray bans when writing poetry. We like what we see and don't even think of stopping because we will hunt you down and force you to write.LOL Wonderful read from you. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Hunt me down and make me write?.... hehehehe Tee Hee ..well if I don't write, my muse will bug me till I break out the pen. I am addicted to the write stuff! smiles, thanks for reading and commenting. hehehe Just one of my lil' devilish ideas, here... LOL Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
I love using sunglasses to hide emotions... It is so much fun!... Let your spirit take you where your body can't go! Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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