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Suffer In Silence ... Missing Muse... 2 poems (repost )
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Suffer In Silence ... Missing Muse... 2 poems (repost ) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Match to wick, spark to flame. Light by which to write ... words by which to give this ache a name. Pen on paper, tears on cheek. A prayer for clarity, relief from this pain is what I seek. The words wont come, must I beg for every line. This need so deep ... mere verse wont define. Without the rhyme ... I cease to exist. My muse again gone, her grace I need to enlist. Loss of poetic light, loss of inspiration. Loss of muse, loss of fascination. If I cant write, I cant breathe. Say a prayer for vision ... grant me poetic reprieve. Janet Marie (darn moody muse)  I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 Mad Season ************ ~Suffer In Silence~ I don't know how to say it poetically, I'm not gonna dress it up in rhyme. I lack the fancy words to tell you ... God, I just miss you all the time. There's no point in trying to deny it, I doubt I could even define it with my verse. What I lost in you seems to have taken my words, the silence of this ache, now seems to be my curse. I don't think I'm ever gonna learn, I have been falling like this for so long. Still I refuse to say you were a mistake ... It felt too damn right to ever feel wrong. So I guess I choose to suffer in silence, I'll just beg my muse for every single verse and every last line. I'm not gonna think of you with regret ... cause with you ... for a little while ... I had a taste of something fine. Janet Marie ----------------- ~Leave~ MB20 from the cd Mad Season It's amazing how you make your face just like a wall how you take your heart and turn it off how I turn my head and lose it all It's unnerving how just one move puts me by myself there you go just trusting someone else now I know I put us both through hell I'm not saying there wasn't nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me I'm not saying we ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let it get away from me ... [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 11-18-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Janet--You know I think I saw your muse hanging out with mine on the corner...I stopped to give them a lift...but they turned into words and were gone...I love these reposts, though...your muse can never be still for long...hugs!! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Janet- your muse will be back. she must be on vacation but with your talent,grace, and beauty...she won't be gone for long. great reposts....never read the first one before. loved them both!! take care. ~amy~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Well girlie...I don't care if it has (repost) behind it or not...seeing your name in the forums makes my night...someone here at my house mentioned something about being able to write poetry if the phone wasn't connected to my ear...yayayayaya  That moody muse will return...and blow us all away once again...I think she does it for the Dramatic effect...  Love ya SS!!!You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Your muse is just taking a rest and letting your heart take over. Don't suffer in silence, yell it out on paper, you do it so well. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
WOW!  Muses Missing In Action? They must have taken a vacation on some tropical island. I wonder why they didn't invite us...Geesh... This is excellent work, no matter if your muse is missing or not. |
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Weave_Watcher Junior Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 21 |
It's not the hunting poem I asked for MONTHS ago  but these two ain't half bad |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Janet sweetheart everyone goes through this type of thing, but it can't last for you or me or anyone here because the muse is like the memory it doesn't go away it just doesn't surface sometimes..then all of a sudden..you get a rush of it....like what I've been going through lately but I know there will be slow times and I hate it as much as you do but I also know it won't last long..it may be someone walking down the street with a coat on the same as one you had when you had your first child..or run into an old friend from high school that will stimulate your muse. I remember commenting on this one before but you know it wasn't very long before you were posting great work again...just don't worry cause it's coming back and you can't stop it. .....take care your old poet pal ethome..... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Janet Marie, don't ever stand in silence, the poetry's not important... the poetic soul is. *HuGS* Write on Muse-gator Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
thanks to all...yes tis the poets worse curse ...the dreaded leave of muse ... but thats one of the gifts of here... reading all the gifted poetry helps inspire and relight the fire thank you for the sweet and encouraging replies ... reposts are a drag LOLlatergators me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Big Hugs for me twin---and I miss you much, m'girl....will e ya later with the latest insanity update...love to you. |
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