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As You Sleep |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
As You Sleep By Richard Maxfield 3-29-2000 Laying next to you in the night Listening to each breath you take Feeling the warmth of your body Eyes twitching, restless in sleep I think of what you may dream Fighting a battle only you know To rescue you from the dream Quite all fears give you peace Longing to be where you are As dreams pass deeper in sleep I move in closer to cuddle a bit Smelling your hair next to me Rhythm of hearts beat as one My breath my life my world Do you feel my love so close I want to wake you for a bit Taste a kiss, feel your touch I will be satisfied being close Breaths taken at the same time Sliding into sleep thinking of us What will new dawns bring Copyright #RM99R4 |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I should keep this by my bed, as I often have nightmares, I loved this poem!!! "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
thank you Rose for your comment. I love your writing. Richard |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I want to wake you for a bit Taste a kiss, feel your touch I will be satisfied being close" Yes............. Loved this  -SEA |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
thank you for your comment SEA. I look forward to reading more of your work. Richard |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome to Passions! I think we all question what the new dawn will bring...  K |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Richard, this beautiful poem showed me a sweet gentle side to your love. She is a lucky girl. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
beautiful richard..! dont you just wish sometimes..that you could crawl into someone else's dream state... alas, we must be content to listen to their sighs.. hugs, g "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
I must agree with "g"...To be able to get into someone else's dreams...I liked this much...Keep em' coming... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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