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Ever Closer
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Ever Closer |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Ever Closer By Richard Maxfield 12-8-2000 It starts with your eyes Soft deep alluring Flashing the message I receive it no doubt You hold your body In that special way Reassuring, inviting, sensual It tells me more The look on your face Waiting, wanting, asking Beckoning me to come Closer and touch I respond in kind Moving closer to you Opening my arms Inviting you in You’re in my arms I’m in yours Our bodies touch As we melt into one Peering deep in your soul We know with anticipation What our further holds For us the world stands still Ever closer we move Until ecstasy at last Your soft sweet lips Fall upon mine |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Max, welcome to Passions! We hope that you find many wonderful moments within...sit back, relax, read, write, ... enjoy all! And check your e-mail for a special greeting! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Liked all the romantic thoughts...James |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
thank you for the card and the welcome. i am sure i will love it here. Richard |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! This is beautiful and I look forward to reading more from you!  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions Forums! We are glad to have you here, there is something for everyone here, and the people are terrific! I thought this was a very moving, romantic piece, and I'm glad to see you are not afraid to express yourself! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Richard~ beautiful piece! very romantic...full of love...once again welcome to Passions!  take care.~amy~ p.s. thanks for the kind replies to my work. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely words..and welcome to passions..hope you enjoy Richard.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
thank you all for making me feel welcome. i am sure i will enjoy becoming a part of this site. i have enjoyed reading the wonderful work here. Richard |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Max, Well done, and welcome to Passions, hope to read more of such beautiful work from you. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Welcome to Passions, Max. A good first post. I look forward to reading more of your work. INclan |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed the read muchly and look forward to many more from you. ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WELCOME!! This is SO beautiful!! I'm going to find more from you now! -SEA |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Welcome, my friend, to Passions, a warmly sensitive place of hearts and souls in all phases of their lives. Warm, tender piece you presented here. jwesley |
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