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My Happily Ever After
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My Happily Ever After |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania 
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My happily ever after Does not come on Horseback or Chariot He is not even a Prince of great royalty None of these things Are needed by me My happily ever after Comes more simply It is contained in Your gaze of blue My sweet dreams of you My happily ever after Is sought after no more It's here in the embrace Which holds me tight It's there in your lips Tickling my fingertips It's there in all you do For my happily ever after Lies right here in you. ~Susie "Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?" ~Cinderella |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Susie, it's so good to see a poem from you! Loved this one! quote: Great lines there.  |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
this is cute. Some one must be very special. Good writing. KM Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Good for you! Well done. And they loved happily ever after Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Elizabeth, I'm so glad to be writing again  . Thanks!Der Keit, Thank you. He is very special. Interloper, Glad you liked it. I sure hope so. ~Susie "Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?" ~Cinderella |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Susie, this is so sweet! Very nice! Denise |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
good to read from you again! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like the smooth flow and the sweet message..James |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Susie, this is lovely! true love is just like this yes....take care. ~amy~ |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
dsnyder, Thanks very much. Glad you liked it .Irish Rose, Thanks. Good to be writing again .jmlee, Thanks. I like this one too .SwEeTnSeXy18, Thanks. I sure hope so !"Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?" ~Cinderella |
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