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Passions Gallery--Martie (flower girl)
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Passions Gallery--Martie (flower girl) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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flower girl, flower girl tell me this day what blooms have you to fill my love's bouquet? flower girl, flower girl give me the words help me to sing the sweetest songs e'er heard flower girl, in your songs are words of love sung by your heart like the angels above flower girl, in my soul sow in the seed help me to grow the love that my heart needs flower girl, flower girl in your heart's field bloom the flowers that help our hearts heal flower girl, flower girl thank you again for growing a love that will last till the end --------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ I could hug you for this one ! You just painted the prettiest poet-trait in the gallery. She's just the bestest flower-child I know. She's gonna LOVE it !  Thank you so much ... and this was a precious sing-songy rhyme !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What a song to sing to her! Just lovely! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A vase of wisdom fills you up a red rose of love will be your buttercup and the fern of words perfectly surround arranged for you by the flower girl you found Thank you, Sven, for seeing me in flowers..and for capturing the girl in me. I am very honored by your words. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 A beautiful song from your pen Sven...Martie is a worth every blooming word..(ohhh that was bad...lol) So glad you wove this one for our favorite "flower girl" |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I like this alot Martie rules! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
...this poem is a bouquet of wordpetals.....love it. Charisma |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Delightful to the senses, my friend. I am sure she will really love it. This is so very beautiful. Much love to you from me Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
her every words blooms poetry.... that is her gift ... and I oh so love to walk in her garden  excellent Sven...perfect portrait of passions rose well done jm |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marge. . . ok. . . just don't squeeze too hard ok?? Thank you my friend. . .Elizabeth. . . thank you. . . BDC. . . I'll let the pun go (for now  ). . . thank you my friend. . .Walt, doesn't she though?? WOO HOO!!! Charisma, thank you my friend. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Startime, thank you for reading. . . Jan, thanks. . . indeed every word is like a field of flowers. . . Martie, thank you so much for sharing with us. . . your every word has been like getting a big bouquet from a loving, caring friend. . . and as you can see. . . your seeds grow in all of us. . . thank you again. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Your words and Marties truly nourish this garden of passions ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You will find no thorns in her bouquet that is for sure. Wonderful tribute to our delicate flower girl. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie...Sven did you proud...and I can see you smiling! Hugs my friend, and Sven? You did mahvelous! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Blooming with words - Bright colors abound - Martie's our Blossom So rare to be found A precious posie Garlands she does wear Flowery printed blouses and round in her hair Yet you flower poet Have painted her well And I think she deserves All because she's so 'swell' |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Victoria, I would say that Martie's do more than my own. . .thank you. . . Mark, she is indeed a rare flower. . . thank you. . . Sunshine, thank you Dahling. . . . . . Bill, I agree totally my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i can imagine her as a gigglish bashful girl dancing contentedly in a meadow of flowers... i liked the image you associated with martie..shall think of her as that way from now on |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
this is a very appropriate poem, Sven. The chosen flow had a nice dactylic feel... fluid and smooth, just like Martie's own poetry and the images she herself conjures. She who would gather flowers, lift a single one before herself and see it for every detail, every line, every shade that the rest of us would simply overlook... that's her, alright... Parasite Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world. |
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