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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 Flirtatious Moon~*Marge Tindal*~ Oh, flirtatious moonin a petticoat sky ruffles of Cirrus around you fly You skirt in and outa flirt of a notion with petticoats flurried causing quite a commotion Dropping your crystalsof prismed light beams You flirtatious moon the girl of my dreams A halo of sparklesyou wear just for glowing Oh, Flirtatious moon your peek-a-boo's showing ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Marge, Lovely Marge, just lovely. And the art work is well, well, just great! BC |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is just TOO cute!! Big Smiles.......  -SEA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--You know that I love this..and you've been sharing the same sky with me...right down to the petticoats..I swear...only you wrote the perfect poem about it, not I. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Marge! I love those little sparkles, too! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, I love it when you planet heavenly!!!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill~ Thank you for enjoying this little piece. It was a spectacular sky show this night ! SEA~ I just can't resist that moon when she flirts !  Martie~ Well ... as I left work, Yes, Philip, I work ! there she was - peeking in and out with her petticoats in full splendor. You know me ... just had to write her. I think we are the Luna-Sisters ! Love ya'- Coasty ! Denise~ Thank you. It was a sparkling sight. Balladeer~ I'd be willing to plantet one on you, anytime, sweetheart ! ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
this is just darling Marge..i can see the whole sky doing the can can ha... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Marge* OHHHHH I love this one....pure "Marge-style"...in all it's glory!!! ((hugs)) |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Marge, this is a ssssssooooooo cute poem. I love everything about it. Thanks for the light-ness. Hugs, ME |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I'm glad I stopped in tonight to read such a lovely poem... and I didn't even peek at her peek-a-boo... well...er...only a quick peek... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ She really can .... can-can ! ButterfliesDC~ I'm tickled that you like it. She was such a prissy little thing ! MotherEarth~ Thank you for a perfectly delightful reply. *Heart-Hugs* to you ! Mike~ Got me smiling ! I saw you sneak-a-peek. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LOL at Mike...this lovely Marge...this is just heavenly...love the image of petticoats flying in the night sky... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Yep, that was a pretty sight ! Thanks for stopping by, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Marge, this is sparkling flirtations....love it... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, this is just soooooo great. I really love it. Absolutely A1 Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
heheh yuh Marge you never disappoint |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Your poems are a feast for the eyes!!! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- wow...this is absolutely beautiful.. i just love when you write of the moon... nobody does it better than you.. love and hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Marge, I haven't been around for a little while and one of the things I missed most were your incredible posts. Glad I didn't miss this one .~Susie "Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?" ~Cinderella |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marge... a lovely lovely sweet write. Hey that's my favorite moon too. Parker |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Marge, you never fail me. Everytime I return you have a moon song sitting out there just waiting for me to read. You know how I love this kind of poetry. Thanks. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marge, I just love your sweet style of write... And my thanks for the smiles you bring along with your poems as you 'always always always' make ones eyes twinkle bright after reading your adorable poems... coco |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ It tickles me to know you find it so delightful ! Thank you for thinking so. Marsha~ I do so appreciate your replies. Walt~ That gives me a smile. Thank you - sending a *wink* your way. Kathleen~ May you never go hungry at my poetic table, sweets. Vicky~ You know I can't help it - she just sends me these little sparkling moonbeams of delight. Angel~ Well, I'm glad you're back ! Thank you for dropping in on me. Parker~ Why - of course it is. *wink* Eloise~ You are a doll ! I'm glad - so glad to share this moon song with you. Dani~ Thank you so much. Just knowing it's enjoyed keeps me pumped ! *Hugs* to all ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well Marge all I can say is leave it to you to come up with such a catchy title.....I really like the style of this one too! Oh Marge you're just a flirtatious poet!! Flirting with all of our hearts(in a good way of course). |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Thanks, love. That little flirt of a moon was the cause of this one. And now look what she's gone and done - Glowing so brightly increasing nightly Such a skirt of a flirt~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"...Oh, Flirtatious moon your peek-a-boo's showing" *chuckle*  this is so sweet marge..i love it so much! hugs, g ps...i see you and i are 'neighbors' now on tricky's homepage nice to see you!"people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh ever so charming forever so Marge... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ Thanks, hon. Yes - the neighborhood is in good hands ! Vicky is such a delightful landlord, is she not ? And the best part is - the rent's FREE ! Karilea~ *Hugging* you BIG TIME ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Marge...I have to giggle mostly everytime I read one of your works...Liked this one muchly... ..Hugs to you.. ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
OOPS....she did it again...Sorry..hehe...  ... ~LL~[This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 12-10-2000).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
always such a delight to read your words.... this really is wonderful Marge.....Greeneyes **** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Lovely poem. I did so enjoy the read. Great work. Love and life, Richard |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyLightning~ Well, Lightning does strike TWICE ! LOL !Glad you got the giggles. GreenEyes~ Thank you so very much. MaxTec~ Thanks, it's a favorite subject of mine - and Martie's ! She likes slivers - I like full and flirtatious ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a wonderful subject for YOU to pen about. We all know just how much you love the moon and when she begins to flirt then we know we can count on you to as well. Very cute my friend. Doesn't matter if it is in little slivers or in the complete face of her, this cowboy loves it just the same. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Another  for a friend ...and ... speaking of cowboys, me Maga ... time for a visit, yes ? YES ! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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