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A group of more winter Haikus
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A group of more winter Haikus |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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* * * Warm breath in the air White puffs of clouds vanishing In a swirl of dance * ** * White lacy frost lays Settles on the frozen ground Exquisite patterns * ** * The chill of the wind Whipping and gusting fiercely Shivers down your spine * ** * The ice shimmering Sparkling in sun’s bright light Vision of beauty * ** * The snow covered hills Picture perfect in splendor From a story book * * * ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful, Tara! Very wintry. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Elizabeth - Thank you for your very snowy reply  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
rosepetals- what lovely little pictures you've penned. enjoyed reading them..  ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
You have intensified the chills across my shoulders! Well done, for cold, old man winter. brrrrrrrrrrrrrr |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
very nice images...i liked the last one best..it somehow appeals to me since i am one who will probably never get to experience snow and only see its majesty in books  |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Ahhhh very lovely haiku. great imagery and that element of expressed thought to meditate. I loved these! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Each one so pretty -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Tara these are lovely ... a wonderful collection of images... well done Haikus and perfect for the weather I have here today. so glad I didnt miss these.. these pages move so fast now...getting hard to keep up take care jm  Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Rosepetals, These are beautiful, I enjoy reading about the snow but sunny California is were I have been all my life, can't stand the cold, very much enjoyed the reading, thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I love all of them. Very nicely done. Poeminister |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Rosepetals, Beautiful vignettes of winter scenes, moments frozen in time, (pardon my pun). Well Done! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such beautiful pictures you have painted in my mind. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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