Open Poetry #11 |
It Used To...................... |
SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sometimes, remembering you doesn't hurt ~not like it used to~ I shed a tear then flick it away like it was never there........... ~SEA~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
GR8 minds work in like manner Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thought-provoking...makes me wonder why 'you" have ceased to be hurt... i like this one..allows one to wonder and picture scenarios for himself |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Very well done. Screeming with emotions. I like this alot. Keep it up. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Short and overflowing with goodbye. Lovely write SEA Rich |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Why SEA...how succinct! I am impressed! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I get those sometimes...sometimes...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nicely done!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, this is simply sensational. So much said in such few words. This is wonderful and yes I love it I really do. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
I really liked this..Every now and then I get those myself, I love being able to "flick" them away.. ~LL~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper~ I bet..... Kaile~ "time passes, broken hearts mend"........ Effigy~ Thank you very much Rich~ I'm glad you liked... Sunshine~ I am very pleased, thank you James~ glad it's only sometimes Vandana~ thanks Mushy~ thank you! LL~ yes, it's that ability to flick them away, that feels so good -SEA |
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