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Just Remember |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
I've been fighting with myself Fighting with my dreams Fighting with my memories Falling apart at the seams Cracking up inside And trying to hide All thats wrong with me So please forgive me I crack up Forgive me if I let go And pounds my fists into the wall Cry so much I fall Into my own little world Where theres just one boy- one girl A place where I can heal my soul Arms I can rest in that will not let me go Two shoulders I can lean on And someone to push off of Baby, just remember While all this stuff is happening When I'm tearing up and falling down Its you I love and you I trust To be my shelter in the dark Just remember babe I love you More than you will ever know Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
CUDDLEZ, this is one powerful write you've penned here... A pocket full of emotions swaying a reader from many a direction and your end verse speaks of a softened heart's sighing plea... hugs2u  coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-06-2000).] |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
this is an excelent poem, filled with sentiment. I loved reading it. KM Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'When I'm tearing up and falling down Its you I love and you I trust To be my shelter in the dark Just remember babe I love you More than you will ever know' Hey, Cuddlez! Good to see ya again! Great write!! Love it!! sp 'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This was a very moving poem. I loved the love and trust you put in it so beautifully. Thank you so much. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Coco: Thanks for your reply! (Yah my heart has been softened lately;0) KM: Glad you liked it... SP: Back with a vengeance! Will be responding to a million poems soon... Finals week here;-). Startime: Great to meet you.... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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