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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2000-12-07 05:15 AM

Annie's dance

As she approaches I take my chance.
She slips into my arms and says "let's dance".
Finally we're dancing cheek to cheek.
No more waiting for her kiss I seek.
Two lips melt now joined as one
I laugh out loud and enjoy some fun.
Her tongue takes a deep dive inside
offering me a sweet sensual surprise.
"Oh Annie I give it up, I surrender
your lips your body feel so warm and tender."
She grip's my hard body seeking a dose of my masculinity.
I embrace her softness in all it's luscious femininity.
And as I look into Annie's eyes I know where my admiration lies.
Within her arms I feel free and alive.
We kiss and dance so close together
as the music shares a dance of warmth and pleasure.
"Hold me tight Annie while we dance forever."

Jameslee@December06,2000

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2000-12-07 05:31 AM

Very nice,
you didn't mention the music,
but that didn't matter did it?

Gloom

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2000-12-07 05:42 AM

Sensual, provacative, erotic, sexual, physosexual, musical, intimate and delightful!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-12-07 02:23 PM

thank you Gloom and ethome for reading and responding...much appreciation...James

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

4 posted 2000-12-07 02:27 PM

Makes me long to be Annie...beautiful my sweet friend

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2000-12-07 02:54 PM

this was a cute and fun read James..loved it..

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2000-12-07 03:00 PM

James, this likes me very much! How wonderful! Dancing...almost as good as...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2000-12-08 06:03 AM

Thank you Paula, Victoria and Sunshine for the nice responses...James

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-01-16 02:12 PM

I like this poem...James

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