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Sven
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0 posted 2000-12-06 11:41 PM


in another time
          in another place
                    he surely must have been a Knight
          in another place
in another time

in another story
          in another tale
                    you can see him upon his steed of white
          in another tale
in another story

in another land
          in another kingdom
                    he served the one true, the only King
          in another kingdom
in another land

in another song
          in another rhyme
                    he was the one of whom minstrels sing
          in another rhyme
in another song

in another time, in another story
     they spoke of him, Knight of glory
in another place, in another tale
     for his quest, he would not fail
in another land, in another song
     he traveled the land, righting all wrong
in another kingdom, in another rhyme
     his tale will last, yea, for all time

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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1 posted 2000-12-06 11:44 PM


As will your writing my friend.  Well done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Victoria
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2 posted 2000-12-06 11:51 PM


a wonderful write..loved it..

               ~Victoria~


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Startime
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3 posted 2000-12-07 12:24 PM


In another land, a Knight he was indeed. How wonderful. *sigh* again your talent takes me into the Passions heart and soul. Wonderful. Much love to you from me

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


CocoBaci
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4 posted 2000-12-07 02:11 AM



SVEN, this is spectacular writing...

I'm in awe of your expression with pen...

Coco

Paula Finn
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5 posted 2000-12-07 03:03 AM


Yes oh Yes oh Sven this is GLORIOUS...
ethome
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6 posted 2000-12-07 06:14 AM


Right on Sven!! For sure he has those noble qualities..he's one of the greatest gentlemen I have been able to get to know here at Passions...for sure he is the one that minstrels sang songs about(still do I'm sure)....great work Sven!
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2000-12-07 06:19 AM


One of my favorites Sven...love every word of this...James
Severn
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8 posted 2000-12-07 06:28 AM


Suddy will love this Sven...

K

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9 posted 2000-12-13 12:02 PM


i wish to be more constructive but it seems like i have run out of words to comment on your tributes so i will just say  
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10 posted 2000-12-13 12:04 PM


Yes, Sudhir is all of this...a great tribute...for a good friend....

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Sven
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11 posted 2000-12-13 01:08 PM


Thank you all my friends. . . he indeed is a Knight of the Realm. . . and a good friend. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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12 posted 2000-12-13 04:59 PM


Just beautiful, Sven!  It seems like you and I are searching for those Princes and Princesses in another time.  If only it were possible.  As a writer, you are truly a knight on a white horse.  Can't wait to read more...
            Best wishes,
                 Elise

Sudhir Iyer
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13 posted 2000-12-15 03:32 AM


O Sir Sven, O dear friend,
I can't express how honoured I feel to be part of your thoughts and part of your gallery...

Thank you so much for penning this gift that provokes amazing thoughts of gratitude....

Thank you, once again...

Regards,
Sudhir

Kethry
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14 posted 2000-12-16 02:46 AM


Painted in Sudhir colors, is this mysterious and magickal write, again you reflect truth from your pen.
write on
Kethry


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15 posted 2000-12-16 11:41 AM


You've done Sven proud, he is so admired and missed here, I always look for him!  Thank you, Sven

"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day,
so I never have to live without you."

Winnie the Pooh



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