Open Poetry #11 |
Passions Gallery--Sudhir Iyer (in another. . . ) |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
in another time in another place he surely must have been a Knight in another place in another time in another story in another tale you can see him upon his steed of white in another tale in another story in another land in another kingdom he served the one true, the only King in another kingdom in another land in another song in another rhyme he was the one of whom minstrels sing in another rhyme in another song in another time, in another story they spoke of him, Knight of glory in another place, in another tale for his quest, he would not fail in another land, in another song he traveled the land, righting all wrong in another kingdom, in another rhyme his tale will last, yea, for all time -------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
As will your writing my friend. Well done. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a wonderful write..loved it.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
In another land, a Knight he was indeed. How wonderful. *sigh* again your talent takes me into the Passions heart and soul. Wonderful. Much love to you from me Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SVEN, this is spectacular writing... I'm in awe of your expression with pen... Coco |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Yes oh Yes oh Sven this is GLORIOUS... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Right on Sven!! For sure he has those noble qualities..he's one of the greatest gentlemen I have been able to get to know here at Passions...for sure he is the one that minstrels sang songs about(still do I'm sure)....great work Sven! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One of my favorites Sven...love every word of this...James |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Suddy will love this Sven... K |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i wish to be more constructive but it seems like i have run out of words to comment on your tributes so i will just say |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, Sudhir is all of this...a great tribute...for a good friend.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all my friends. . . he indeed is a Knight of the Realm. . . and a good friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Just beautiful, Sven! It seems like you and I are searching for those Princes and Princesses in another time. If only it were possible. As a writer, you are truly a knight on a white horse. Can't wait to read more... Best wishes, Elise |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O Sir Sven, O dear friend, I can't express how honoured I feel to be part of your thoughts and part of your gallery... Thank you so much for penning this gift that provokes amazing thoughts of gratitude.... Thank you, once again... Regards, Sudhir |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Painted in Sudhir colors, is this mysterious and magickal write, again you reflect truth from your pen. write on Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You've done Sven proud, he is so admired and missed here, I always look for him! Thank you, Sven "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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