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Open Poetry #11

Black Hair

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2000-12-06 09:19 PM

The coal black hair doesn’t care,
It’s searching,
The cold night air doesn’t scare;
Winter winds can’t chill skin,
It’s prowling,
Shadow’s sins It’ll hide in
Darkness deeply covers moves,
It’s roaming,
Broken bottles razor grooves
Sliding silent closes ground,
It’s hunting
The coal black hair makes no sound.
It’s killing.

Gloom

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2000-12-06 09:37 PM

now you have me wondering whats under
all that black hair

i like the rhythm alot Professor..enjoyed

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2000-12-07 05:24 AM

Thank you, Victoria
Glad you liked it,
Don’t worry, it’s just a small cat,
Wandering the alleyway.

Gloom

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2000-12-07 05:57 AM

Hey Gloom I don't know exactly what you're writing about but that's part of the enjoyment of different types of poetry.. I love the images and ideas......keep your wig on........ethome

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2000-12-07 08:48 AM

Thank you, ethome,
Glad you enjoyed,
Just a look out my window to the alley way,
Writing what I see.

Gloom

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