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Love's Bright Season
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Love's Bright Season |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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~Love's Bright Season~ Winter emptied snow covered hills sparkle in lonesome silence soon redbirds skate on ice laced branches a delightful sight to behold Waltzing snowflakes dance to a Merry Christmas tune as chimmney's puff messages in the wind nipping at your thoughts this cold winter day Hands folded in warm mittens reach for rosey cheek's kisses planted on frozen lips soon warm from the sparks that fly eye's twinkle at all the reasons why love makes the season bright BloomingRose |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Deb, this is so bright and so pretty...thank you for lifting my heart... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ Oh, my gosh - that's pretty ! 'redbirds skate on ice laced branches a delightful sight to behold' I can just see it !  What a delightful write from you, dear poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yes love make the seasons bright....even that cold winter... love it. Charisma |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very lovely Deb..enjoyed the beautiful images you painted.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
BloomingRose, Excellent writing and imagery...nicely done.. Poeminister |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sunshine~ Thank you Marge~ Thanks, I had a vision of birds determined to stay on those icy branches lol Charisma~ Glad you like it, Thanks Victoria~ Thank you. I know from reading your poems, you too enjoy adding imagery to your writing Poe~ Thank you kindly |
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