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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Your love came to me as a complete surprise all those nights alone when I would fantasize- of a man, just like you with love so clear in his eyes a need for me unyielding unwilling to compromise- or settle for anything less than my satisfied sighs my pleasured moans my fulfilled cries- from the love he gives me there's no need to over analyze look into my heart and you'll realize- He is my moon to light my night skies My morning sun to warm me when I rise. ~SEA~ |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
this is a wonderful poem. A love like that is very special, and you describe it so wonderfully. KM Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Beautifully written Sea...all the love just shining thru |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
how lucky you are to have found that warmth in the morning Sea-girlie ... its so rare when our fantasy love is realized i envy you  wonderful passionate writing later-make-us-sigh-gator jm I looked into the sky for my anthem The words and music came through But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen Looking into you |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Very touching and passionately written. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, I'm grinning and smiling like a Cheshire cat, I love this one as you knew I would. This is brimming over with love, gorgeous utterly wonderful and loving.  Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"My morning sun to warm me when I rise" What beautiful lines you have here, SEA. Fairy tales can come true.....  |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Sea....how lovely..Lets all know that fairy tales and fantasies can come true...Loved it..all of it... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Sea wonderful poem...weaven with warmth and love....love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Der Keit~ thank you Paula~ glad you liked this Janet~ I got very lucky with my husband, he is my dream come true! Tony~ thank you so much Marsha~ you sweetie! thank you  Balladeer~ it makes me feel so happy to see you in here, thank you for reading LL~ they can, and they do!! thanks Charisma~ thank you, glad you stopped in! -SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA Good day, Beautiful write. I Like this muchly. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
He is my moon to light my night skies My morning sun to warm me when I rise. ====================================== Lucky guy. Any kin to Sunshine Truly enjoyable! More! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
PM~ thank you Interloper~ glad you enjoyed this -SEA |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'of a man, just like you with love so clear in his eyes a need for me unyielding unwilling to compromise' Beautiful, SEA! Isn't REAL love a great thing to experience?? Love this!! sp 'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sea* This is truly beautiful...glad to see that love like this lives in your heart~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* yes, this gives one hope that fantasies can come true. Wonderful. I am so happy to read of you love. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening SEA, I must say that you are absolutely awesome with your writings. Goodness, a romantic, I presume. You do write from the heart. BC |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
SP~ real true love is the BEST!! BDC~ thanks Startime~ thank you so much BC~ Gosh,thanks! I am a huge romantic! -SEA |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sea...gorgeous poem, so full of love...it must be wonderful to have found it. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sea you just poured wonderful love fantasies out on this screen I just read...wonderful writing....write on! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SEA, this is going in the book of my forevermore's... An awesome write PoetFriend, you truly have captivated the reader with this endearing expression of love in your heart... Muaaaaaaah on cheeks I adore it... coco |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SEA, You have written of a love as pure and innocent as new fallen snow. Simply beautiful. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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