Open Poetry #11 |
![]() ![]() |
I Wonder |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
I Wonder I wonder, did you know, How much I needed you so? How feeling your touch late at night, Filled my heart with such delight? The warmth I felt when you were near, The love I felt when you were here. Filled my being with joy and peace, Gave my soul a sweet release. I wonder did you know, How much I needed you so? I never wanted to let you go, Although I did, you're gone...So? How it hurt, How hard it was, To watch you walk away from us. But having you here where you didn't belong, Would have been by far, much more wrong. I wonder Do you know, How much I Thought I needed you so? ~Lady Lightning~ < !signature--> The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown [This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 12-06-2000).] |
||
© Copyright 2000 Joy Lucas - All Rights Reserved | |||
CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
LL, a heart tugger entree you have displayed on screen... Welcome to this family of PoetFriends and may I say this poem you write expressing a love of once a time I gotta tell ya I hear it's beat... Thank you for this read ![]() ![]() |
||
lisad Junior Member
since 2000-12-05
Posts 22 |
Lady Lightning, such beautiful words, and how true they are... I could feel your pain as I was reading.. Cant wait to read more... love ya, cupts |
||
Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Welcome to Passions LL! This is a wonderful entrance your weave holds so much emotion the reader can't help but feel this poem. Great writing and I look forward to more of your work in the future~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
||
Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome Lady Lightning!!!! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
||
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome!! You are being very understanding in this poem...great expressions of a love that still fills your heart and mind!! |
||
Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions...wonderful entrance, and I will look forwards to see more from you. Charisma |
||
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How it hurt, How hard it was, To watch you walk away from us. But having you here where you didn't belong, Would have been by far, much more wrong. ================== Welcome to Passions Lady Lightning(cool name) you've made a lovely poetic entrance with this poem of unselfish love . Its very nice to have you here with us and I look forward to more of your poetry. take care jm I looked into the sky for my anthem The words and music came through But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen Looking into you |
||
Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyLightning~ Welcome to Passions. Heart-rendered writing. I felt hope spring forth in your closing. Stand up and be *hugged* ! ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey kiddo, bout time you posted one. Now that didn't take much egging on did it? This was a wonderful entrance to Passions and you show a lot of lady like style in the way you handle to situation and your thought processes in it. Wonderful write my friend. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
||
Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
CoCo...Thank you for your kind words...Much appreciated... ![]() lisad...Wonder if you felt my pain cause you have seen my pain? Hmmm? LY..cupts.... ![]() Butterflies...Thank you so much, your words mean alot... ![]() Irish Rose...Thank you for the warm Welcome... ![]() ethome...Your words are much appreciated..But I do have to make a point here... ![]() ![]() ![]() Hope it's ok to make a point here...oops, if not... ![]() Charisma...Thank you for your words...Maybe more, I need much, much work... ![]() JM...Thanks so much..means alot to me to know you took the time to read my simple lines...It was scary, but fun ...Maybe I'll try it again...Who knows?... ![]() Marge...Thanks for the "hug"..Here's one right back at ya...Hope has sprang forth..It always does...Without it, well, I think we all know..... ![]() Last but certainly not Least...Hey Cowboy,words from you mean so much as you know..Thanks for taking the time to read my work...My words are mere "scribbles" compared to the emotions I feel when I read your work and all the rest of the "Best" here...Thanks for the egging..Don't know if they'll be more but I will always be here to read and reply to all the "wonderful" people that I know are here pouring theirs hearts and souls out for all of us to enjoy... ![]() ![]() ![]() |
||
Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
CoCo...Thank you for your kind words...Much appreciated... ![]() lisad...Wonder if you felt my pain cause you have seen my pain? Hmmm? LY..cupts.... ![]() Butterflies...Thank you so much, your words mean alot... ![]() Irish Rose...Thank you for the warm Welcome... ![]() ethome...Your words are much appreciated..But I do have to make a point here... ![]() ![]() ![]() Hope it's ok to make a point here...oops, if not... ![]() Charisma...Thank you for your words...Maybe more, I need much, much work... ![]() JM...Thanks so much..means alot to me to know you took the time to read my simple lines...It was scary, but fun ...Maybe I'll try it again...Who knows?... ![]() Marge...Thanks for the "hug"..Here's one right back at ya...Hope has sprang forth..It always does...Without it, well, I think we all know..... ![]() Last but certainly not Least...Hey Cowboy,words from you mean so much as you know..Thanks for taking the time to read my work...My words are mere "scribbles" compared to the emotions I feel when I read your work and all the rest of the "Best" here...Thanks for the egging..Don't know if they'll be more but I will always be here to read and reply to all the "wonderful" people that I know are here pouring theirs hearts and souls out for all of us to enjoy... ![]() ![]() ![]() The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
||
Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
this is a wonderful poem. it has a nice sentiment too it. It is better to love and lose than to live a loving lie Keith Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
||
Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Oops..sorry all...didn't mean to send this thru twice...A "newbie" here taking up valuable space.. ![]() ![]() The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
||
Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Der Keit...Thanks for your kind words...And yes, I must agree it is better to love and lose than to live a loving lie...How true... ![]() The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
||
Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
and another new poet wields her pen at Passions... ![]() straightforward and to the point an unpretentious delivery of real -- um... anti-passion...? |
||
SEA![]() ![]()
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LL~ ![]() ![]() |
||
dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
I like the ending, how you chose to put that reverse, of "how I thought I needed you.." Very good. Shows how we can overcome, can understand times we've had to let go. ![]() With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
||
Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Rebel-Letting go was the easy part, the hard part was staying for ten years. Thank you very much for your kind welcome. SEA-Thank you and I promise that you will see more as I am being forced to write these days.LOL Sorry, but I am a little shy about my poetry but getting more comfortable with the friendly people here. dragonpoe-The ending is my way of finding a bit of closure. Thank you very much. The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |