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Brand New Me |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
With you I am brand new again With you I feel fresh again With you, Not only when darkness falls But with you, At the end of it all Together it seems just right What could extinguish such a light, As you and I? Together even one time, You and I Forever in my mind We could go on again as two Something I’d rather not do We are more Than the sum of equal parts We are more Than broken, beating hearts Lucky is me now that I am found Lucky is me, finally unbound Who could ever Denounce such a thing as this? Who would never Fall from the very first kiss? |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Amazing how energized a new love can make us feel isn't it. You have penned a wonderful piece here with this one. Enjoyed the read alot. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful write!! Write from the heart..makes you sound like a new person full of life with happiness..you captured that well!! |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
I like this, its so very true. KM Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely and i enjoyed the rhythm and form  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*clapping with delight* oh yes, new love. How very delightful. I love it. Much love and happiness from me to you. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thank you all for replying, sorry i couldn't thank you earlier, but my internet connection at work is messed up...oh well *S*. You have warmed me more than you know. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Beautiful to see the light of new love dancing in your words |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Together it seems just right What could extinguish such a light, As you and I? Together even one time, You and I Forever in my mind We could go on again as two Something I’d rather not do We are more Than the sum of equal parts We are more Than broken, beating hearts ================================= very, very, cool write....romantic and longing like your style adding this to my library before Ron takes forum down. sorry I missed this before... hard to keep up in here these days. take care jm No one ever told me ... I could get lost while standing still ... and sorrow doesnt make a sound ... as it takes away all your will. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is wonderful! |
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