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Snowy Promises |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Promises were kept Sparkling white snow swept the land Beauty blankets all Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is sooooooo beautiful that I am struck dumb. This is utterly incandescent, wonderful work love really superb. I love it yes I do. Take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautiful images Sunshine..so much said in these lovely haikus...  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love this snowy promises... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
You have captured the beauty of snow when one is able to just view it from a perch inside a warm abode. It can be so absolutely wonderful, until one or one's loved ones must travel distances in it. Your poem is fantastically peaceful, lovely. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Here is hoping that your snowy blanket never melts away. At least not the beauty of it. Lovely write my friend. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey hey Sushine I like the sound of this... there is a real beauty there for sure..I don't know how long I want those promises to be kept but yes my dear poet lady you did a very nice job on this.....I don't know how you wrote it without it melting...you must have used the name Karilea when you signed on to write.....take care....ethome |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
on it's way my friend. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I read this even as the snow blankets the ground here...stunning Sunshine just stunning |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The queen does it again! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ohhhhhhh I'm looking for that white stuff to land here for Christmas!!!! I hope I hope I hope  Enjoyed this -SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely haiku. Nicely done. Poeminister |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, I believe you were struck smart...incandescent?...enjoy, enjoy... Victoria...brevity is good...thank you... Thank you Charisma... Virginia, when loved ones travel in snow, I always hold my breath... Mark, who knew snow could be warm...thank you... Ethome, I enjoy the sound of your keys tapping responses to my offerings...it is I who thank you... Sven, should be about 10 degrees here this weekend...thank you... Paula, stunning times two...wow...thanks... Interloper...just a servant, thank you Sir... SEA...I'll send up a few requests...thank you!... Thank you Poeminister... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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