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Don't Lose Me...........
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Don't Lose Me........... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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"Don't lose me", said my love to me As sun announced the day. Those words sincere placed in my ear Caused me to smile and say..... Just treat me with the kindness of a woman who believes in love Allow my love to comfort you when you need help to get you through... Accept my love and don't abuse me.. Darling, you will never lose me. Place you faith here in my hands.. Believe I'm one who understands.. Show me that your love is true.. Make me know why I love you.. When weak, don't hesitate to use me Sweetheart, you will never lose me. My love is not the kind of love that disappears as lost It's yours until the end of time, regardless of the cost. It has the strength to conquer anything that may arise and you can know these words are true by looking in my eyes. So treat our love with dignity.. Don't be afraid to lean on me.. Begin each day with sweet caress.. Believe in me and I will bless whatever God caused you to choose me.. My sweet love, you'll never lose me. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, this is so wonderfully positive Michael ... absolutely beautiful sentiments. The sincerity behind these words is truly felt. If this be true to life, she is one lucky lady to have your heart!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sounds like you have it made my friend. I just love it when you bring us one of your tender pieces to waltz through. This was a very tender and loved filled piece and if you have a promise like this from a woman then all you need to make sure of is that she will fry up that spam for you and you have it made. Wonderful read once again. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Are you telapathic ? you have just plucted the exact way that I feel at the moment out of my head . But you've written it down even better than it was in my head . Great poem, I enjoyed reading it . As usual you get all the meaning and depth of a novel in just one poem . Thanx a lot . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ You make it sound sooooooo easy. *wink* I greatly enjoyed the variation of the rhyming scheme. It's so ahhhhhhing to read your thoughts. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
God bless you. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Very beautiful way to respond to her, Mr. Balladeer. You are a lucky man to have her love. I wish you both all the joy love can provide. This is very romantic and from the heart and I totally enjoyed reading it. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Balladeer--Such sweet and tender love shines in this piece of your heart...you know I love it! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
These are wonderfully sincere and reassuring words.. Just the type a girl needs to hear every now and then... Nicely said, my Deer...  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I really enjoyed all the different rhyming schemes you used here...and on top of that I think it's a wonderful appeal to the heart of your lover with devotion and deep seated love. Really smooth delivery you are quite the master at this style and evey piece I read is just so smooth and free flowing.... well..... until your next... If your woman doesn't find you handsome then she better find you handy....ethome |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Wonderful...Beautiful words....Whoever she is, she's mighty lucky... LL |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May yet one more female-type poet applaud...and wish you the very best with your lady... and now may I ask...whatever are you going to do to rid yourself of the love-bug? [Oh my, I don't think I really said that! Help...LJA's taken over my computer!] Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Awe I figured you'd want to crawl into my pocket so I wouldn't loose you   This was beautiful Michael...showing your sweet and romantic side so very well...tenderly penned dear poet~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My love is not the kind of love that disappears as lost It's yours until the end of time, regardless of the cost. It has the strength to conquer anything that may arise and you can know these words are true by looking in my eyes. So treat our love with dignity.. Don't be afraid to lean on me.. Begin each day with sweet caress.. Believe in me and I will bless whatever God caused you to choose me.. My sweet love, you'll never lose me. ==================== you just need to be kissed for this one.. lots of spammy smooches... NOT even-ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis-will do this sweetheart of a rhyme justice such a romantic and well expressed emotional promise... your just so good at this later-got the whole forum sighing-gator jm I looked into the sky for my anthem The words and music came through But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen Looking into you |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh...I love this one. I'm putting it in my library and hope you will include it in the Valentine's issue of the newsletter.  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Kit...you sweet girl! She's not as lucky to have my heart as I am to have your replies! Thank you Mark...you got it...whatever it takes to keep the spam cooking! LOL! Your words are muchly appreciated, sir angelswing...not telepathic...I have a hard time reading cereal boxes!...but I'm glad you enjoyed..... Marge.....ahhhhhhhh, thank you!! Rose...thank you! He has...in many ways. startime...I knew another romantic would enjoy it...thank you! Martie....I am proud of anything that you love. Thank you, my friend... Nan....I know. I read it in a book somewhere ethome...I'd just like for her to find me!! Thank you very much for such kind thoughts. I appreciate you LL....I thank you for reading.. sunshine....you didn't REALLY say that, did you? Curse that LJA! What do I do with the love bug? Turn her into a ladybug, I guess Butterflies...what gives me such a nice feeling that your pocket would be a wonderful place to be? Care to tango? JanetMArie....yea, I NEED to be! Know anybody with spammy lips? Thank you, wonderful poetladyfriend deVine one...thank you! I'd love to...but sunshine is the editor and she's one tough cookie, I'm told [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 12-06-2000).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Balladeer, this is absolutely beautiful and as JanetMarie has said above... "You are just so good at this" coco |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Balladeer- oh my...how did i miss this one? this is absolutely beautiful...how i would melt if someone said these words to me...big *sigh* wonderful write.. ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
'Deer, I love your mushy poems! And this one is a beauty. No woman in her right mind would knock you back with this one. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
dear 'deer. THIS is totally awesome work. (You old rhymer you...want to teach me? heh.) There is nothing trite in this, nothing stale - it's a poem that waltzes. Well done you...it's great. |
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menage a demideux Junior Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 32 |
yes, i do know monsieur, l'homme most likely no speak la francais... so, i answer to your poem en espanol-- Éste es un pedazo hermoso de poesía. Gracias por compartir esto. Deseo que esto fue escrita para mí. Nunca le perdería o perdería este poema. Si sirvo me escribiera un poema como éste, yo le diría... Le amo! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* loving you would be so easy, you show your kindness and love in all your words. you know how to touch a woman's heart. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
coco...ah, you're very sweet! Thank you!! vicky...if someone doesn't, they are CRAZY!!! Thank you Dee...thank so much. Guess I've met a lot not in their right minds! severn....hey, easy on the "old rhymer" bit!! LOL! WONDERFUL to see you!!! menage...tu siempre va a estar un parte de cada poema escrito por mi. Seguiras viviendo dento de mi mente y alma.....gracias, mi vida Charisma...and a woman's heart is a beautiful thing....so are your wonderful thoughts...thank you |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I LOVE YOU!!!! uhhhhh.......I mean......  Really romantic poem here 'Deer.....*SIGH* I love the secure feeling this gives -SEA |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
How lovely!! With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I just had to read this again, I wish I spoke Spanish, but I understood the French! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Balladeer-Had to read twice, but still can't seem to catch my breath. Simply devine, kudos to the master! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Balladeer! Lovely! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
SEA....SHHHH! Your hubby is NEVER gonna let you come to Florida! dragonpoe...I thank you for enjoying... Rose...I wish I understood the French! gemini....you are always so nice to me! Thank you very much!! Denise....love your lovelies!! * smooch * |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Dear Balladeer May I call you "Mr. Penny"? "Mr. BAD Penny"?? After all, I've tried to lose you for a long time, and you just keep coming back. These poor women have no idea what kinda guy you really are! So, as a public announcement: WOMEN!!!! DO NOT BE FOOLED BY THIS SCALAWAG!! HE WILL WOO YOU, MAKE YOU FEEL WONDERFUL, GIVE YOU LOTS OF PLEASURE!! AND WHAT WILL YOU HAVE THEN??? NOTHING BUT A SHABBY MEMORY OF FURTIVE GROPINGS AND MULTIPLE O's. HOW SHALLOW!" :0 Incidently, 'Deer - I like your poem. [This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 12-08-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I think this post confirms it dear 'deer. YOU are the 'King of Romance' around here!!! Never doubted it for a minute. We need a case of cyber-smelling salts to revive these swooning women!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks PdV for bringing this back up to the light of day...we all needed another go at this... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yea...me too....what LongJohn said?.... |
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