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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-11-18 11:51 AM



My Everlasting Love

My love is everlasting, until time itself stands still
It will last forever, throughout all eternity
Deeper than an ocean that with my hearts love I fill
Love that's ever flowing leading to the sea
An ocean of love that sweeps away my life, my soul, my will

My hope is a shining beacon beaming with glowing light
It lights up the darkness calling me to you
Brighter than a million stars shining through the night
It guides me to your heart that's ever true
Showing me the way to all that's pure and good and right

If your love should ever fail as maybe it perhaps might
I'll keep our love safe tucked here in my heart
The way I feel, the joy like sparkling angels delight
No I'll never willingly let this love depart
Love like this is too rare for me to treat it so very light

You asked me to trust in you and I certainly truly do
Now is the time for you to put your faith in me
My love, you know that my heart, my soul will be ever true
That our love, this truth, was destined so to be
My fate was sealed, decided the day I said I love you

Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

© Copyright 2000 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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1 posted 2000-11-18 04:41 PM


Marsha-
this was so beautiful!! your heart and
love shine through so wonderfully in this.
i hope you don't mind, but i want to share
this poem with Laura. is that okay? just
a really great poem...full of the lovely
person i'm getting to know. take care.
~amy~

Marsha
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2 posted 2000-11-18 04:48 PM


Amy love, take it to share with your true love Laura, I'd be delighted if it made her feel as loved as I know you love her. You are very welcome love, enjoy it.
Take care
              Mushy Marsha
                    

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2000-12-14 02:23 AM


Look what I found here!!!! These are the words of a heart in love...so glad I went looking...hugs lady...
Lady Lightning
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4 posted 2000-12-14 02:55 AM


agreeing with serenity..so gald I couldn't sleep..    simply lovely Marsha...    ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Marsha
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5 posted 2000-12-14 06:14 AM


Serenity, thank you very kindly my friend, I do appreciate it. I really liked this one of mine, and just thought that no one else did. Well except Amy, that is.
Thank you once again  
                              
Lady Lightening, I thank you too, I often find little treasures in the back pages. It's because these pages move so fast sometimes that I often miss so wonderful writing. (Not mine, other poets   )
Thank you again
                Mushy Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


Janet Marie
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6 posted 2000-12-14 11:25 AM


this is beautiful Marsha...
lovely imagery of the stars and oceans laced with the dedication of your heart...
romantic and wonderful
well done as always from our resident romantic dreamer
jm

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

Marsha
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7 posted 2000-12-14 08:03 PM


Janet Marie, thank you so kindly, As I said I liked this one, it sort of called to me. So I thank Serenity for resurecting this. And I thank you for seeing the love and hope within it.
Take care
                  Mushy
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


jwesley
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8 posted 2000-12-14 08:06 PM


Mark me down as a serenity follower also marsha...loved the feelings here.

jwesley

Marsha
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9 posted 2000-12-15 07:11 AM


Jwesley, thank you truly. I really do cherish each and every reply.  
Take care
              Mushy Marsha
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


SEA
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10 posted 2000-12-15 09:54 AM


Marsha~ you are amazing.........

"My love, you know that my heart, my soul will be ever true
That our love, this truth, was destined so to be
My fate was sealed, decided the day I said I love you"

this is gorgeous!   -SEA

Marsha
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11 posted 2000-12-15 01:59 PM


Circe, sometimes, not often but just sometimes, I write something and it sort of captures the moment. And you read it through and it seems right, well this is that one time that I actually liked and was happy with the result. Thank you muchly, I really do mean it.  
Take care
             Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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