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Take a Trip |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Take a Trip Come with me sail to ecstasy There are cabins inside and out. Pack nothing but your lunacy Your naked self without a doubt. Sail the islands of your well spring Into the kingdom of your mind. Look the mirrors ageless aging It's there inside imagines find. How easy to cut this record How easy is the contraband How easy to dance on the sword The misty sword of understand. To thrill in awe of sensation Beyond the bother of annoy. Undescribable relations And yet of an intimate joy. Book passage on this ship please do Pass through the embassy of you. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Okay, you've talked me into it. I've been waiting a lifetime for a cruise like this sy. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Packing lunacy and self...do I need to apply for a Visa? This likes me....{~,^} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Come with me sail to ecstasy There are cabins inside and out. Pack nothing but your lunacy Your naked self without a doubt. Sail the islands of your well spring Into the kingdom of your mind. Look the mirrors ageless aging It's there inside imagines find. ================== Sy-baby ...if I "pack only my lunacy" ... YOUR "GONNA NEED A BIGGER BOAT" and with out my self doubt ... I'll lose a hundred pounds.... so if-ins I get me sea-sick pills ... will ya put me suntan lotion on me "emabassy's" LOL ...   *winkiewinkie* lets go stinky...destination "Beyond the bother of annoy." how WAY COOL that line is .... later-wind-in-my-sails-gator  me I looked into the sky for my anthem The words and music came through But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen Looking into you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Do you want an inside or outside cabin? Sunshine, You don't need a visa. *L* JM, I'll make you my first mate, winkiewinkie. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Seymour I love the way you write poetry ...got some great imaginative lines there good man..... "How easy to dance on the sword The misty sword of understand." I've got to say I love that kind of stuff .... makes me smile...take care...ethome |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome, Thanks for the kind comment. You sure you don't want to come along, a lot of the girls want to go. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sy, if ethome doesn't want to go. . . I do!! I've had my lunacy packed for just such a journey!!! Great one sir. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 I loved it Sy...a very cool side of your writing...the man of many pens  and I'm ROFL at my SHY sis JM...oh MY  The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I can't decide if we're discussing the Love Boat or the Titanic but I'm ready to go down, regardless!!!! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SEYMOUR.... I gotta tell ya I'm still giggling at Balladeer's reply Anyhow allow me a moment of composure here arrite here I go... To sail amongst the winds of blue seas With our friends at this passion family Would be a treat one much too sweet I got the sitter booked and ready to flee A cruise of leisure one described by your pen I shall bring my buoy just in case PoetFriend coco giggle giggle you're too funny [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-06-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Glad to have you aboard, but like Balladeer said this could be the love boat or the titanic. LOL Butterfly, Delighted to have a butterfly aboard. Balladeer. If it's the titanic, butterfly will fly us away. Coco, Lovely poem and comment, glad to have you aboard.Winkiewinkie will be in charge of entertainment. |
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