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For My Someone Special
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For My Someone Special |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
A gentle smile plays around these lips pen clasped lightly with my fingertips A sheet of white on this table, lay As I ponder the thoughts I wish to convey Your face, an imprint, upon my heart I imagine, a vision, a work of art landscapes of beauty, I believe I'd find with just one peek inside of your mind There's melodies, rapsodies, within your soul there's galaxies of love, if truth be told there's patience, kindness, extroadinary things there's romance, adventure, & all these can bring I'd fill the world with the sound of sweet sighs for one moment of warmth in your burning brown eyes stars were made there, before heaven bound to ensure their perfection & they never fall down They left a sparkle, that never may die making souls dance, when they look in your eyes I'm given the priveledge, to write in a song about the miracle of you, my entire life long Remember these words that are penned with such love you, my dear miracle, are what dreams are made of.. -Tier{R.T.} 1/00 |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautifully written...enjoyed..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Victoria, it was written about someone who deserves far more praise then I've given here... *smiles* -Tier |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tiersdin, What a romantic melody you have written. So soft and bursting with love. May you always feel this way. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Wishmaster Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 24Luton, Bedfordshire, England |
The love you feel for another permeates right through this poem, it is almost tangible. May you feel it always. Wishmaster. ~ You cannot be what you want to be if you do not know who you are ~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Playful and lovely. Corinne |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Lone Wolf: I think I will always feel this way about this particular person! *smiles* thank you for reading and commenting... {Loved the quote by Keats, btw!} Wishmaster: When I read you comment, I had to go back and read the poem to see if this was true. I write what I feel, but I am never sure if and when someone else reads it, they will see those feelings in my words. *smiles* thank you much! Corrine: Rarely do you see these two words together to describe a poem! I like that thought! Thanks for commenting!! -Tier{R.T.} |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Your face, an imprint, upon my heart I imagine, a vision, a work of art landscapes of beauty, I believe I'd find with just one peek inside of your mind' Lucky, lucky person who has the honor of being the subject of this poem! Beautiful write, Tier! Love it! sp  'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully written this person must be extremely special to recieve praise such as this I truly enjoyed this "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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