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Good Morning (to everyone) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Good morning restless choir songs, invading passages their scores. Fire and ice fray headstrong, the traveller's place unsure. Bold actors chant self serving impromptu at the door. Good morning lights encroaching, icy fingers stab the glass. Sleek swords of light in motion cutting shadows on the sash. The looking glass creeps open, enticing golden bowls to act. Good morning clocks keep seeking the conscious thoughts to flow. Dream sailors are retreating Eldorado's shores of gold. A mirage of goals conceding... the slumbering lids unfold. Good Morning!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good morning right back...this was quite interesting to read so early... made me wonder at your reference to "golden bowls"... but all in all, a lovely dream that would ask me to pull the coverlets back over my head and seek one more hour of bliss... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sunshine the Bible refers to the golden bowl as the skull and the area that holds the brain and creates thought pattern..don't you dare ask me how I know that!!.. hence my reference to the same thing in the poem on this page ..Grandpa.....ethome... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and...you, YOU, m'friend...gave me the second most interesting thing to happen this morning--grin? Fantastic read, and I will be back to read...again. (Deja vu? All over again? Hugs and grins...) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Good morning lights encroaching, icy fingers stab the glass. Sleek swords of light in motion cutting shadows on the sash. The looking glass creeps open, enticing golden bowls to act. ============== what a way cool verse that is... awesome imagery that one paints for the reader.. good morning to you sweet poet of the north ... *raising my mug of tea to ya* I see you woke up on the wise side of the bed today  excellent writing here ... later-rise and shine-gator jm "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" Lao Tze Tao ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh Sunshine you are a little deviless!! I'm still glad I came in second....he he... Janet ...it's a VANtastic morning here and out of the dream I came andRUUUUSSSSHHHED to the computer and posted this poem I wrote four years ago...so much for the wise rise eh! That's Canadian eh! Originally we were just called CND but one Canadian years ago was asked to spell it he said...CehNehDeh.. so now we've got Canada..History for the morning...love ya ethome your poet pal |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
oops Ethome...check your response to [ahem] [shhh]...serenity... and thanks for the lesson. Must have missed that page.... I love learning new stuff.... hugs... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very interesting good morning. Thanks. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Well, it appears your golden bowl is full to overflowing ! Delightful ponder for this morning ! But you can keep those icy fingers !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ethome, another beauty, and good morning to you, except that I've had the morning and am now at work. Wonderful amazing write, and I'd add some others but you've got my whole stack there. Can't you just sling me a few back? Utterly great work, and I really love this one.Take care Mushy Marsha  And Marge is right your golden bowl is full to overflowing, and this is just the latest of it's gems. Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ahhh Ethome .. what a wonderful morning greeting! Beautiful imagery and superb flow through these words. I send you back a hearty Ontario morning hello to you, my friend ... snow and all! Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Opps sorry Serenity I replied to Sunshine when I should have been replying to you...well I'm still glad I came in second best...if it's what I think it is I wish I came in first...but I just sit here and mope about...... it's alright.....ethome Thanks Catalinamoon for the nice thoughts....much appreciated. Thank you Marge...I did'nt want it to be just an ordinary good morning...I'll keep the icy fingers away from you I promise...write on!! |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Well, good morning to you too Loved the write and the interesting information as well; I too love learning new things Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Marsha sorry you had to go to work but I guess we all have to face the music..I'll be looking for your return...in the meantime thnak you so much for your kind comments. Hey KIt! I haven't heard from you for awhile and it's good to hear from you..this may be one of the first times in a long time when you've got snow and we don't....thanks so much for taking the time to read...ethome.. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Good morning to you too ethome..interesting read indeed.. Enjoyed..time for that cup of coffee now ha...~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Ethome. Beautiful poem. Liked it all the way through and the imagery in your words. Nicely written. take care, -Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome, Excellent writing, you got my vote. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Peppermint for the kind words and glad you could pick up on that little something...ethome Victoria I hope it helped wake you up and you enjoyed that coffee thanks for reading. Thanks Poeminister appreciate your comments very much...ethome.... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Seymour for the excellent word much appreciated!!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ethome, I'm still at work, but I need Passions to keep me on track. Well that's my excuse and I'm sticking to it. This is such a great poem, that I've printed it out and stuck it in the hallway. Where it will be read by all those lucky ones who are only visiting here. (Lucky because they don't have to eat here )It really is a fantastic read. I'd have left a pen and some paper for comments but it wouldn't stay there very long. Thanks for giving me a smile. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
ethome, loved the read. Its a wonderful format for this poem, a joy to read. The message and wording amazing... right on CND...lol. and glad you came it to teach Sunshine something...lol. Parker |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
E- and a good morning to you as well! this was very clever and descriptive and really made me think. great work, but all of your work is. take care. ~amy~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks so much Marsha I love your descriptions of where you work...thanks for liking this work enough to put it on the wall there......ethome. Thanks Parker for taking the time to read..I love the word structure in your work also..very good stuff..take care..ethome Amy thanks fot the compliment you are always so nice and personable...ethome |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Good morning whispers soft As I wake to face the day Good morning plays on sunsplashed bed And your words send me on my way Good morning drifts on coffeed lips That tease with a tender kiss Good morning said with sweet sweet rhyme Every day should start like this... ...morning friend... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Paula thanks for the poem it is really good I appreciate the thoughts....ethome |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
good morning? liked this a lot. going to sleep now. sweet day dreams. to the rest, good night. Love is the law, love under will. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks jlocke sweet dreams you can read this when you wake up and pretend it's morning... take care ethome |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ethome, it'll be morning in about 30 secs, so seems like a good idea to send this one back to the front page. (I'll use any old excuse me, and sometimes even none at all. Still say this is an excellant poem. It also got quite a few readers while it was on the wall, it would have got more except that someone obviously wanted it so much they walked off with it. Either it's by now been circulated around the navel dockyard, or it's walked into the doctors mess. Didn't I tell you they were a tricky lot. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Marsha for the read and I'd watch them there they may steal your muse and then where would we be...ethome |
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