The Greatest Christmas Gift

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Open Poetry #11

The Greatest Christmas Gift

hoppy
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since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

0 posted 2000-12-04 02:14 PM

Here is a little poem i created to describe the gift i wish i could give someone...i'd love to hear what you think about it in both a poetic and objective standpoint.....

utopia is what i desire to give!
our own world of vivid dreams where
your imagination is the only limit.
everyone will desire our gift of
venturing from our fears and living
outwardly the life we imagine inwardly!
let us come to a point where we can
invest our hearts together in a loving trust

Swift as a shadow, short as any dream;
Brief as the lightning in the collied night,
That in a spleen unfolds both heaven and earth,
And ere a ma

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-12-04 03:05 PM

Hoppy ~ I thought this was pretty and very nice.....it would indeed be a wonderful Christmas gift!

-SEA

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