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A dream come true...
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A dream come true... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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~A dream come true~ There she was, standing draped in lunar silk, As the moon smiled shining as white as milk, There she was, moving in a breezy swoon, As birds of the night sang in soulful tunes. There she was, spraying her angelic rays, As she touched me by her amazing grace, There she was, spreading her inviting arms, As she called me by her endearing charms. Then I woke up from the mystical dream, Holding on to lilac-scented moonbeams, As her figure silhouetted itself, And her body scattered into tiny elves. And they kept on with their away-running, And my eyes kept on with their following, Seeking love in those fleeting blue eyes, Searching within halls for truth amid lies. There she is standing now, throwing real smiles, As lawns changed from winter to spring textiles, There she is flying now, spreading her wings, As free as a bird, willing soul to sing. There she is flowing now, bubbling keenly, Dancing downwards upon quivering greens, There she is streaming now, wearing a shawl, Cascading beauty like a waterfall. The dream has now become reality, There is no more catching up game to play. I have been kissed by an angel gently, And the sun shines on my shoulder each day. The rainbow has tipped my eye-brows with love, And I hold my breath, take a grateful bow. ~~~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
~Sudhir lyer~ AMAZING!!  This is sooooo beautiful! Loved this ~SEA |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a beautiful romantic poem!! Sudhir you just get better at these all the time!! .... ethome |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
lovely lovely lovely images...  Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Within the moonbeams of love he is cast Finally finding true love in a world so vast With the tenderness of an angels kiss Our Sudhir is ecased in love's true bliss ============== What a wonderful poem of love my friend and no-one brings it to the light of day any better than you and your magical quill. I know that you use a quill instead of a pen because all of your poems are touched with the softness of an angel's wing. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
SEA, my friend, thank you so much... so happy that you liked this one... ethome, maybe the romance is getting the better of me... thanks a lot, my friend... Karilea, so glad that you see them... Thanks... Mark, your verse is so beautiful that I am touched and blessed at the same time to have friends like you.... thanks a bunch... for all that you say and think about me... I am truly honoured... My regards, Sudhir. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sudhir~ A most delicate and tender piece so wonderfully penned....inspirational my friend ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Sudhir my friend. . . truly from your heart. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sudir, you know this is just a jewel... The heart from which you express this poem is endearing to those who read... As always PoetFriend, your words on screen just leave me in a silence of sighs... coco |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
How nice it is to read you again Suddy... this is a poem that drifts and sighs - taking the reader along with it. Nice write my friend. K |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Lunar silk? Sudhir, you are shining in this one!!!!! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Excellent writing I really enjoyed this one. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Such silken phrases from your pen. 'I have been kissed by an angel gently' Me too - Thanks, angel ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There she was, standing draped in lunar silk, As the moon smiled shining as white as milk, There she was, moving in a breezy swoon, As birds of the night sang in soulful tunes. There she was, spraying her angelic rays, As she touched me by her amazing grace, There she was, spreading her inviting arms, As she called me by her endearing charms. Then I woke up from the mystical dream, Holding on to lilac-scented moonbeams, As her figure silhouetted itself, And her body scattered into tiny elves. ===================== oh my goodness this is soooo PRETTY ... Sud... i dont know who "she" is but she inspires AMAZING things in you!!! what a very cool poem.... what a beautiful poem ... there she is...in your heart  and seeing your name here puts a smile on my face this morn. jm I looked into the sky for my anthem The words and music came through But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen Looking into you |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Tracie, I am so glad to be inspirational... Thanks a lot... Sir Sven, Thanks so much... Cocobaci, your reponse leaves me with so many pleasant smiles, thanks O Kamla, Thanks so very much... your words mean a lot always... Kathleen, Thanks a million for the shaine you provide in this thread... Seymour, So glad that you enjoyed... thanks... Marge, O my friend, only you could come up with such touching responses... Thanks Janet, O my Brilliant friend... Thanks so much for such a wonderful response.... and for all the things you always say about me... Thanks to all and Many regards, Sudhir |
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