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simpleman46
New Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 7
Michigan

0 posted 2000-12-04 12:24 PM

A whisper of hair glides across your cheek,
And I imagine how it feels,
To be
That thoughtless curl,
Cutting across your delicate features,

To be
That string of silk,
Tickling your skin,

To be
A strand of you,
Before I am brushed away.

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

1 posted 2000-12-04 12:33 PM

Man46, I really enjoyed this poem I see it to be your first and I trust I shall have the pleasure to read many more...

Very tender yet it whispers of sensual...

coco

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2000-12-04 12:33 PM

Oh, WOW! Tender, so tender, but magnificently powerful!!

WEll done!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-12-04 12:40 PM

SimpleMan~
Such a delicate thought - very pretty.

Welcome to the wonderful world of Passions In Poetry !
You're gonna like it here.
So bring your muses and settle down to some
wonderful poetic enjoyment.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2000-12-04 07:14 AM

Simply lovely.. Sometimes much can be said in very few words.. You've certainly accomplished that here. Welcome to Passions - It's a wonderful place to be - You'll love it here. Check your email for a special greeting..

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2000-12-04 08:19 AM

A whisper of hair glides across your cheek,
And I imagine how it feels,
To be
That thoughtless curl,
=============
how very poetic and lovely ...
how very romantic to be that cherished.
wonderful writing
Welcome to Passions simpleman...
so nice to have you here...I look forward to more of your work.
take care
jm

I looked into the sky for my anthem
The words and music came through
But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen
Looking into you

mutington
Member

since 2000-11-29

Posts 132
New Jersey, USA

6 posted 2000-12-04 08:23 AM

**Simplistically beautiful **
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

mutington/joyce :)

"I can live by myself, but not within myself."

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

7 posted 2000-12-04 08:26 AM

this one is thrilled with desire, and so sweet and tender.
well done

Charisma

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

8 posted 2000-12-04 08:26 AM

wonderful first post!!  what a simple, yet, completely romantic thought...
"...to be that thoughtless curl..."

awesome...!

and welcome to passions!!

hugs, g

"so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2000-12-04 09:18 AM

I loved this and may use your strand for my Christmas poem if it is ok..

welcome

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2000-12-04 09:24 AM

WELCOME!

This is stunning.......definate "wow", enjoyed this

-SEA

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

11 posted 2000-12-04 09:40 AM

lovely thoughts..

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

simpleman46
New Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 7
Michigan

12 posted 2000-12-04 11:37 AM

Thank you for all the kind words!

It's encouraging to get such a positive response from my very first post. I'll be sticking around this forum reading and posting for some time... thank you!

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

13 posted 2000-12-04 12:30 PM

A whisper of hair glides across your cheek,
And I imagine how it feels,
To be
That thoughtless curl,
Cutting across your delicate features,
To be
That string of silk,
Tickling your skin,

To be
A strand of you,
Before I am brushed away.

oh my!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is so incredibly beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!

welcome to passions, wonderful entrance.

Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

14 posted 2000-12-04 12:41 PM

Welcome, indeed!

What a debut!

I look forward to many more ... many more.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

15 posted 2000-12-04 05:00 PM

"W*E*L*C*O*M*E SIMPLEMAN46", I applaud you on this outstanding peice...

loved it!

-Tier

nicolette
Junior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 42
St. Paul, Minnesota

16 posted 2000-12-04 05:08 PM

The person you love is one lucky person. To have someone so tender and admiring. That's a really beautiful poem.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

17 posted 2000-12-04 05:09 PM

Welcome to Passions, and what a vivid entrance...well done!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

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