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I Cry for Love
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I Cry for Love |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I Cry for Love Some say the best things in life are free. Love is... because there is no price you can pay to steer loves precious touch your way. When an opportunity for love comes to you does anyone tell love thanks a lot but no thank you. I think not... we all seem more than eager to embrace the magic of love face to face. And as love begans to settle in we find that love can be our friend. It only wants to flourish and to grown if nourished properly by your heart and soul. Now some may say that love will not carry the day. It takes some time to tempt and tease us and than it slowly slips away. Still I believe not that love is a desire we must pursue when hearts are ready love will come share time with you. Assuming all of the above is true why do lovers part and say "We're through." Why does heartbreak come and make us cry. The answers are not entirely a complete surprise. Perhaps one loved...perhaps one lied. One was in love and the other not it would seem. They only used the pretense of Love to completely destroy their lover's dreams. Jameslee@October09,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 10-12-2000).] |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
I understand where you are coming from. Wonderful piece. Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
read your words in silence, words inlard with true spoken words with sence, make that I cry with you. Charisma |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
James, I admire this write... Somehow this poem slipped thru my nitely reads... So back to the top you go again...  Coco |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
lovely poem... well written If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
jmlee12345: To love unconditionally and tenderly wait 'till hearts are ready. Very nicely said, I appreciate your words. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Ladycat, Charisma, Coco, Avanti, and Gemini. I appreciate your kind words...James |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ just tell me this has nothing to do with you and Mina....?!? Are you ok? I hope all is well with you. -SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sea me and Mina are doing fine...still the beginning stages of a relationship and I am happy....was only wondering why Love seems to end in heartache so many times and feeling sad to see friends going thru the pain of Love...I have a wonderful hope that me and Mina will make it...yes she is still Mina my Love...James |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ Sooooo glad to hear it sweetie......I really hope this is "it" for you two! -SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sigh...you could be writing this for me you know... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sea and Paula for the nice comments...Paula you were in my thoughts when I wrote this as were all of the one sided relationship I have been involved in personally...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James, beautifully written as usual James you seem to do this so well and effortlessly. Maybe you make it look effortlessly because you are so good at writing them. Love this one James, and happy that you and Mina are fine. Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is honest and refreshing! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Now some may say that love will not carry the day. It takes some time to tempt and tease us and than it slowly slips away. Still I believe not that love is a desire we must pursue when hearts are ready love will come share time with you. ====================== SBJ..Im so glad I didnt miss this poem ... its excellent .. your rhyme flow and cadence are perfect and as always you express your emotions in a way we all feel and relate.. with your usual gentle grace later-sweetbabyjames-gator jm |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
So true!!! This flows so effortlessly...and the message is true and meaningful!!! Wonderful poem; really enjoyed feeling this!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I really enjyed it a lot!!!!!!!! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
James-- this was so beautiful and sad. very heart-touching. you write with such depth and emotion that you transcend your reader into the exact moment you are at. thank you for sharing this lovely poem with us. take care ~amy~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
thank you Marsha, Katleen , Janet, Peppermint, vandana and amy for the lovely words you have given me...James |
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poetic_imperfection Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 45 |
You made me stop and think about this one. Very nice Poem. PLY |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
James this is a wonderful wise reflection on the qualities of love ...I really enjoyed the read......ethome |
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