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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
today was /in suspense/ w a tching water go down a dra i n/ever live like this? i th in k i can re l a---te i think i can re_late so still ..so sti ll all-the-while-unappreciative-of the mundane rape theres a weird world outsidemydoor its got insincere walking talking parrot s s s of varying taste and denial//s and theres mo/re thought than sound theres more thought than s ou n d d just ^^__what_do you think when theres more thought_tha n _sound "you can have my isolation..you can have the hate that it brings you can have my absence of faith..you can have my everything" "so impressed with |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
I was just think_ing how we_ird this really i_s what I w_as th_ink_ing. Is this weir_d thin_king Just a thought!  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
maybe it is because I was at a Radiohead concert last Saturday but this reminds me a lot of their lyrical style, a very interesting poem, and yes I can well relate to the disjointed state. excellent piece. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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