Open Poetry #10 |
Hollow |
Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
A tactile basin sunken deep beneath the mountain’s ridge caress left a space like naked wilderness; a place for memories to keep. ~ ~ ~ Though the brilliant sunlight beamed, no crocus swelled beneath the snow. No splendid greening grass would grow, although the moonlight’s sheen then gleamed. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ And sorrow’s grey lies down to weep, for night has crawled across the field. No comfort will this evening yield, no gentleness to help me sleep. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ (After major breast surgery, which, incidentally, proved me NOT to have cancer.) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Rosemary... this touches me deep.. Im sorry hon, I didnt know you were going thru this... and praise the lord for the good news.. but still, you've been thru a lot... I went thru this with my grandmother ... I understand these emotions you so eloquently express in this very well written poem .... your in my thoughts take care jm |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Rosemary We are all here to comfort you. May you not weep in solitude knowing we all care. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Many hugs to you Rosemary, and your beatiful way of saying this captures me. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rosemary~ You know I've held you in my prayers and God has been gracious ... This is lovely - AS USUAL ! You've such a tender way of weaving words across the pages of my morning ... 'Though the brilliant sunlight beamed, no crocus swelled beneath the snow.' BEAUTIFUL ! I love you, lady ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I have to tell you baby you captured me on this one too... ever, dale Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Janet Marie, Daniel J D, Martie, Marge and Lucky (my husband) - thank you all for your wonderful, sweet and kind comments! They mean so much to me! The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hugs to you being sent from Texas as you have truely touched this cowboy today on this one. |
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