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The Journey To Forget
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The Journey To Forget |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I wander through this empty house Touching old memories the pain still fresh I dont know why you echo here You've never been in this old house At least not in the physical sense But you spent countless hours here in my heart Now I want to start on the journey to forget I know there is a path out of this pain I know it wont always be this sharp But right now your face is all I see And your voice still sings to my heart Its not that I think you'll come back I'm not sure I'd say yes if you did I'm just trying to set my feet on this journey This journey that leads to forget And maybe one day your memory Will only bring smiles not tears And maybe one night I wont whisper your name As I let pain slowly fade into sleep And maybe there will come a new love A love that wont fade with the dawn But for now all I see is a long road for me To heal my heart with a journey to forget. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great poem as always. You describe such misery yet with a drip of hope. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Lovely writting...I think we all have our journeys to forget...To heal...To love again..You say it so beautifully!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
to attempt to put behind the past while bravely venturing to embrace the future....loove the sentiments here  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes time and healing will be your friend...embrace them beautiful angel...James |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
I'm on the same journey...I wish you luck and more happiness in the future.  Very well written...With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Such a long trip ..... you've certainly written your thoughts well. Enjoyed reading this one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Just when you forgot about this one it comes back Sweet beginnings for you! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Paula-I understand when you say "You echo here", very powerful and sensitive statement. I loved your words. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I can relate to this - one of your very best Paula - I felt your heart in it |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ronil...thank you my friend Beth...thank you...some journeys are just longer than others kaile...I dont feel evry brave...thank you James...my dear friend... you are always here for me...thank you Broken_Winged_Angel...I can only wish you a short journey and hope that your pain grows less every day Marge...thank you dear lady Insect...lol well you could have let it slip away...not sure I am quite ready for a new beginning...but thanks Gemini...yes the echoes are what I cant seem to lose...thank you Bill...thank you...I hope you never have to feel this again |
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