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Where Stars Cry Out
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Where Stars Cry Out |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Where Stars Cry Out With a draw of breath, I find myself absent of light. Again, descending to the place where tides lay in curls -- of white silk upon the southern shore. Where stars cry out for the pleasure of someone's eyes to peer solemnly at their luster. And where I can touch your spirit, alone and undisturbed -- the only place we can call our own. Where my heart can cry -- and then be happy again, at once in need and then again to overflowing. Where I can go to seize the worth of being a man and touch upon your grace, each kiss another assurance -- ever me, ever you, ever us. © Robert Joseph ~enb~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very beautiful Robert..  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Robert* Welcome to Passions! What a beautiful and bitter-sweet entrance, this is breath taking work. I'll look forward to more in the future from your pen~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Robert, Beautiful and romantic writing. Your website is filled with many wonderful poems. Hope to see more of your work here. Welcome to Passions!! Hope you stay a while. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RJ~ Welcome! this is wonderful, I loved the flow..... -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RJ~ A romantic write that is softly and gently rendered. This talented piece drew me to your web pages, where many lovely thoughts are to be seen in a unique perspective. I greatly enjoyed and will return to read some more. Welcome to the greatest family of passionate poets on the Internet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Robert- Welcome to passions! Beautiful and romantic first post. I enjoyed it very much, and will look forward to reading more from you. -vicky |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Robert, welcome to Passions! This is breathtakingly beautiful! Please check you email for a special welcome from Passions! Denise |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Beautifully done, Robert. You sure know how to make an entrance! Welcome. Dee |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Victoria, Thank you for taking the time to reply. I'm pleased to know you enjoyed this piece. Robert Joseph |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Butterflies_dont_cry, I'm grateful for your kind response. Thanks for taking the time to do so. Robert Joseph |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Lone Wolf, Thanks for your thoughtful remarks, and for taking the time to visit my site. Robert Joseph |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
SEA, Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this piece, I appreciate your kind remarks. Robert Joseph |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful entry to our home. WELCOME to Passions and I too look forward to reading more from you. |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Marge, Thank you for your generous remarks, and for taking the time to visit my site. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Robert Joseph |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Vicky, Thank you for your kind words, and welcome. I'm pleased to know you enjoyed this piece. Robert Joseph |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Denise, Thank you for your kind regards, and E-Mail greeting. I greatly appreciate both. Robert Joseph |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Dee, Thank you for the kind welcome, and thoughtful remarks. I appreciate you taking the time to respond. Robert Joseph |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Mark, Thanks for the welcome, I appreciate you taking the time to do so. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. Robert Joseph [This message has been edited by Robert Joseph (edited 10-11-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
RJ~ ever so beautiful this first post of yours...great writings indeed Welcome to the home of very passionate poets and this fits the bill perfectly. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Smooth entry into passions. Continue to display your talents for all of us to enjoy. Great work. |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Welcome to Passions and what an entrance.. Very well written.  With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to Passions. and what an entrance, great work.... have visit your homepage, and *wow* you have done a great job there, have visit the ïce Castle" and that decide me to bookmark your homepage, love it.... and will check it out, when I have more time Charisma |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very, very nice...James |
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natelan Junior Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 34Escondido, CA, USA |
*bows* Well, first-off, welcome to netpoets... I can truthfuly say, that with an opening such as this, many here will embrace your work with much delight. About the poem specifically, I must say, it almost seems to carry on it's own voice... I can hear it, more than see it... Wonderful work. *bows* A man in a bubble is a man in trouble. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome welcome and more welcome!!~ This style made me want to read again and again. I love this. Anything to do with nature, stars, and of course romance Good to read. Kathleen |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Tracie, Thank you so much, I'm pleased to know you found this piece to be enjoyable. Robert Joseph |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Daniel, Thank you for taking the time to reply. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Robert Joseph |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Broken_Winged_Angel, Thank you, I appreciate your welcome. I'm pleased to know you enjoyed this piece. Robert Joseph |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Charisma, Thank you for your pleasant reply, I appreciate you taking the time to do so. Thanks for visiting my site, as well. Robert Joseph |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
James, Thanks for taking the time to respond, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Robert Joseph |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
natelan, Thanks for the response, I appreciate your thoughtful words concerning this piece. Robert Joseph |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Kathleen. Thank you for your kind words. I'm grateful for your reply. Robert Joseph |
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CitiZen-One Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 84New Mexico |
My eyes began to water as I read this poem, I had to hold back the tears from flowing, like star droplets from diamond eyes. This poem painted the scenerary for me, one of dark blue and white milky points in the heaven. Where 2 embrace and in a moment eternity is found, eternity in a moment, oh so profound. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
mister J a different look on stars and their shine...very nicely done..welcome to passions |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
CitiZen-One, Thank you for taking the time to respond, I appreciate your generous comments. Robert Joseph |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
wayoutwalt, Thanks for reading, I appreciate you taking the time to reply. Robert Joseph |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Welcome Robert, allow me to offer what I am sure are repeated welcomes. If your first post is any indication, I have a hunch we will all enjoy reading your work. TLS |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Welcome to Passsions...your poem holds such a soft romantic feel...much enjoyed. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Welcome to Passions Robert. This is a stunning piece of poetry. I'm really looking forward to more. Juls |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
The Lonely Stranger, Thank you for the welcome and reply. I appreciate them both. Robert Joseph |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Martie, Thank you so much, I appreciate your welcome. Thank you for visiting my site as well. Robert Joseph |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Juls, Thank you so much, I appreciate you taking the time to respond. Robert Joseph |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I missed this the first time thru...welcome Robert, and what a truly lovely poem |
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