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Nikolette Sadness

Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 337
port richey fl.

0 posted 2000-10-09 09:37 PM

i've been having a little writers block lately...hopefully it's over...

~Heart~

among the ashes and the dust
the wreckage and the rust
lies the left overs
of our life

burnt to the ground
my heart was found
still beating
but not bleeding

my heart was torn apart
til the end
and from the start

my soul is long dead
killed at start
gone at end

from here and forever
always but never
i'll stay here
and try to find
the peices of my heart
love not kind

Nikolette Sadness

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2000-10-09 09:43 PM

Very expressive, Nik. I liked the part about trying to find the pieces of your heart.

Elizabeth

Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near...
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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2000-10-10 03:38 PM

Yes sometimes love does not seem kind when only one wants to tango...James

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

3 posted 2000-10-10 03:57 PM

Nik baby girl...I will always love you...hugs darlin child

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

4 posted 2000-10-10 05:14 PM

A wonderful read. I think you've got your inspiration back!
Dee

[This message has been edited by Dee (edited 10-10-2000).]

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

5 posted 2000-10-10 08:13 PM

A very moving poem.
I enjoyed your moving words. Somewhere out there a new love awaits, as long as your heart wants to be loved.

Daniel J D

Nikolette Sadness

Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 337
port richey fl.

6 posted 2000-10-11 03:00 PM

thank you all for your replies...i'm glkad you likes it but i really dont think i'll be writing much now...no inspiration....

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

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