Open Poetry #10 |
Cowboy Up!...another late entry, Mark. |
Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Cowboy Up Ok, so I’m impressed, Your style is really great. But seven seconds is enough You don’t have to try for eight. You don’t need to catch my eye With deeds of bravery and courage, I’m already looking your way now, don’t go getting that bull in a rage. Just stand up, dust yourself off, Look up and smile my way. Just to see you in one piece Will really make my day. please don’t think I don’t see you Or notice all that you do just walk on over, stop and say hello you never know what I’ll do. * Yeah, I know doesn't look like much of a bootprint now, (It did when I wrote it!) and the spur sorta shrunk. [This message has been edited by Dee (edited 10-10-2000).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dee~ being a Cowboy junkie myself, I LOVED this....... -SEA ( I see the bootprint/footprint) |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thanks Sea, I think I'm still on a high from our rodeo a couple of weeks ago. Dee |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The so called eight second ride Is one that must always be rode To show that darn stubborn bull just Who has written the cowboy's code. Surely you have looked to see The ways of a cowboy in his life The will to be all that he can be Evading horns that pierce like a knife Thanks for noticing me in the crowd I will greet you each and every time I will not put my head up in a cloud I tip my hat to you in this little rhyme Wonderful entry and it looks like a boot print to me my friend. No such thing as a late entry!!!!! Well done. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-10-2000).] |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thanks for the comment and the poem, Mark. Dee |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Dee.....love this boot print.... great work Charisma |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thanks, Charisma, glad you liked it. Dee |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Now, be honest, did you have your riding outfit on when you wrote this. I really enjoyed this one! Kathleen |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Very creative Dee, nice work! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Glad you liked it Kathleen. Actually, I think I was still in my PJ's when I wrote it. lol Dee |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thanks Butterflies. I must have missed you while I was in reply mode. Dee |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee, I think this is great, a very good bootprint too! Now if i were braver I'd give it a go, but my graphics are not even in the same league. (A bit like Gillingham playing against Manchester United, a very uneven match) |
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