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MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

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0 posted 2000-10-09 05:25 PM

Falling Into Night

As twilight looms
this brisk fall day,
the sun begins descent.
Watching from the window seat
I think, I dwell, lament...

Leaves are breaking
from the hold
of branches that release,
allowing twisting, floating of
a life to lay in peace.

Scattered colors,
shades of bright
golden reds and browns
piled upon each other,
resting softly on the ground.

And up above
the indigo
replaces sunsets view,
to watch the stars begin their shine
my thoughts, I turn to you.

Phasing in and out,
the moon
behind a midnight cloud
of mystery, of endless love,
eyes tear, as heart beats loud.

Falls' howling winds
will carry cries,
desires born in flight,
traveling swiftly to your side
for comforts needs, tonight.

Walking hallways
in shadow's path,
I take you to my bed,
slipping into warmth of thought
beneath moon's quilted spread.

It's glow has always
touched my soul
to shine upon me light,
and aid me in my dreams of hope,
as day turns into night.

M
10*2k

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2000-10-09 05:29 PM

lovely as always Mmoonchild...

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
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2 posted 2000-10-09 08:05 PM

I am glad you stopped by Victoria...it's always nice to see a friendly face

M

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2000-10-09 08:16 PM

Hi Maureen,
You my dear, are a master! Loved this writing of yours.

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
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4 posted 2000-10-09 09:10 PM

thank you Bill..I sort of liked this one too...I have been stuck inside with the flu (I think) and with the weather turning cool the leaves are falling now....and my thoughts became activated finally...to some pleasant thoughts
~~softsmiles
Maureen

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

5 posted 2000-10-09 09:18 PM

Beautiful. I really enjoyed it.

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
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6 posted 2000-10-10 09:29 AM

Alan..thank you..I am pleased you stopped by
~~softly

Maureen

juliet_2u
Senior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

7 posted 2000-10-10 09:55 AM

Oh Maureen you had me from the very beginning with this one. The images I was able to see were so beautiful. Thank you so much for the gift of this.
Juls

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
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8 posted 2000-10-14 01:14 AM

Juls...if you only knew at the moment how much I appreciate your kind words
~~soft hugs to you
Maureen

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

9 posted 2000-10-14 01:29 AM

Maureen, from the title to the conclusion you've graced us with the touch of luna magic. Very much enjoyed.

Robert Joseph

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