Open Poetry #10 |
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Backyard Menagerie [Knows.....] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
Backyard Menagerie breeze and I spoke today as sprightly the gust played pushing me along, puffing southern breezes, northerly born, bringing hint, before cold, the warm whispering winter’s coming robins packing full the backyard knowing we grow nourishment just for them, our guards as little soldiers they stand chirping, singing hungry demand knowing winter’s coming pet rabbits of nature, eyeing warily the lay of the land as they see the spread of grain and seed and even chase brown squirrels away leaving nothing left to weed waiting for winter's coming a woodpecker, striped herringbone-like in darkest black, gray and white red blazoning on it’s neck adopted us rather circumspect and treats its whereabouts with respect watching for the winter coming cottonwood readying to let go all of summer’s greenery leafing flutters have turned to a whiskery sound of scenery in the Kansas winds that blow eager for winter’s coming the breeze and I spoke today robins packing full the backyard a woodpecker, striped herringbone-gray ‘neath cottonwood readying to let go soon to be blanketed in white, it’s so winter’s coming ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 30 September, 2000 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-09-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
it's coming yuh it's coming..very nice |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Karilea ... from one nature lover to another ... wonderful!!! I could picture this perfectly, beautifully written, and summed up so nicely in the closing. Well done! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Winter has already come in some parts of Michigan. . . 11 inches!!! WOO HOO!!! This was great Sunshine. . . got my gloves and scarf all ready!!! ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
WOW, Kit and Sven... thank you all...Sven, I'm jealous! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooooooo...very pretty |
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