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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-10-09 02:43 PM



Days have past since you’ve felt this way,
Come on speak up, I want to hear you say,
What cause you to arise in such a dismay,
Why do you hide behind what is lost in the past,
When I demand the truth do not look so aghast ,
No more wasteful motive spells you can cast,
Come on don’t keep in suspense and reveal at last,
These readers are waiting to hear your part. (smile)


Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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Paula Finn
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1 posted 2000-10-09 11:01 PM


I always read so much into what you write....you are so expressive and you tease the mind with your words
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2 posted 2000-10-10 01:21 AM


Out of all the people you reply, you are the one who has tuck by my words even when they fail to show themselves.  

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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3 posted 2000-10-10 08:38 AM


??   ??    Inquiring minds want to know....

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

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