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streaming ... (inspired by a season's last fishing expedition)
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streaming ... (inspired by a season's last fishing expedition) |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
streaming ... rain clouds dance over top of my head holding arms in do-si-do’s ballet scrambling with a wind at their backs their rushing led by the sky’s valet emerald canvas stretched over mountain tops the break of sienna and bark holding still inviting wings of red feathers and stings dreams to fly and soar my aerial thrill sparkling spring running its spindly length rapid's froth building in eddy's sloe depths aquamarine shimmers 'neath quivering feet rocks with fur under a watering swept streaming broken beams of warming rays splashing upon my face 'til comfort calls the day awakens to gently greet angler’s homing heaven, sans walls a sporting cast towards a quarry’s hold sinking gold reflects its catching intent spinning blades of enticing wet feasts come away empty, yet never to resent the second try hits a hiding mark luring a smash and the fight ensues freedom names both, winners for the day a streaming return, it imbues M.A. Miller 09.25.00 < !signature--> My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. [This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 10-09-2000).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
streaming broken beams of warming rays splashing upon my face 'til comfort calls the day awakens to gently greet angler’s homing heaven, sans walls BEAUTIFUL!! stunning lines in this...written with grace. you have a way with words, love the style. take care. amy  "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Your powers of description continue to delight the senses M.A. ---this is lovely, and btw...whaddya catch? |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
thanks Amy for those kind words and for reading ... hi serenity ... Smallmouth Bass are really hittin' good this time of year ... thanks for reading |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
MA--I love to fish...this wonderful poem has given me fishing longing and envy and hunger...thanks! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
this was great..loved it..makes me want to go fishing. ha ha.. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
AWWW Mark...take me next time...this sounds just so very perfect |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Martie, Victoria, Paula ... thank you for your generous words ... it was a wonderful day ... |
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