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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2000-10-09 09:22 AM

First Time

First time our eyes met
fires turned on, not quenched
by time, or tears of regret
no forgotten kiss, smell of skin
sweet bliss within...
feels like the first time
if only in my mind

BloomingRose

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-10-09 10:48 AM

My friend, you have penned a such feeling in such few words with this one. It does feel nice to have the overpowering senses of love flowing through you doesn't it? Loved this one my friend.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-10-09 07:27 PM

Very beautifully done, BloomingRose! Just lovely!

Denise

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2000-10-09 07:31 PM

BloomingRose-
This is really beautiful, as all
of your poems are. Love it.

-vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

4 posted 2000-10-09 08:49 PM

Mark~ Guess I was daydreaming again.lol Thanks for reading.

Denise~ Thank you!

Vicky~ Thanks for your kind words.

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2000-10-09 08:59 PM

"feels like the first time
if only in my mind"

What a lovely verse BloomingRose! So much said within these lines ... beautiful!

Best wishes,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 10-09-2000).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2000-10-10 03:56 PM

well written verse Rose ...
much emotion expressed in a few powerful words.
I know this feeling well.
take care
jm

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

7 posted 2000-10-10 05:18 PM

"feels like the first time
if only in my mind."

Some memories are worth hanging on to, especially "firsts".
Dee

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

8 posted 2000-10-10 05:51 PM

Kit~ Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reading

JM~ Much is remembered in the first love first time momements.

Dee~ Yes they are. Thanks

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